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Implicit 11-08-04 12:27 AM

Voted For: Kwell

yo u killed him........

Drew u do too much self glorification man...attack ur opponent...u had some played out punches and u aint attempt no personals or nothing..u really need to elevate man...overall3/10

Kwell u murdered him..ya wordplay was good..ur punches and personals were good..overall7/10

Terse. 11-08-04 02:31 PM

votes appreciated.....keep 'em comin...i'ma return favors...

Terse. 11-08-04 10:16 PM

uppin again.......drop an honest vote n i'll do the same for one of your battles....

th-C 11-08-04 10:20 PM

Voted For: Kwell

drew
too simplistic rhymes and half the verse was played... work on almost everything man, you just need to battle more and get more experience.

Kwell
Won this easy with a more complex verse... wordplay, setup punches etc. So yeah, theres really not much to say, it is obvious who the winner is.. kwell had more lines as well.

Return the favor please.
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Terse. 11-09-04 11:39 AM

uppin this shit..................

Terse. 11-10-04 09:36 PM

uppin this shit again...drop a vote please........

Magic5 11-10-04 09:45 PM

Voted For: Kwell

Kwell
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was pretty dope.. most of ur punches connected.. the concepts were pretty good as well.. u had no personals..

LIL'DREW
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is decent.. flow is pretty good.. no multis.. attempted wordplay, but it came out wack.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
both had an alright structure.. as well as an alright flow.. neither had good personals.. Kwell had more multis.. better wordplay, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Kwell gets my vote..

VOTE - KWELL

Please return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig.. Thank You.

Terse. 11-11-04 08:32 PM

all votes appreciated...uppin this shit for more...

Terse. 11-12-04 04:48 PM

quit sleepin on this battle...uppin this shit.....

Loveliss Grandz 11-12-04 04:58 PM

Voted For: Kwell

kwell good word play and u'z a funny muthafuka too.
out of both of these my favorite line was
"and even if i was a hoe, you couldn't pay me to give a fuck/"
Lil Drew u had a little sumn' goin' there too but u just didn't
put no real effort into this.so i gotta vote for Kwell.


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