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Barburyin 11-04-04 04:37 PM

addin more to my vote but troop just hit it harder he explained how it was all goin down n had harder hits. his personals were killa to he was just throwin everything he had at dope. dope ya verse wasnt to great sry man. i mean i just wasnt feelin n of ya punches or nething so like i said it goes to troop

~Luciano~ 11-05-04 04:38 PM

uppin this shit

For$akeN 11-05-04 06:02 PM

Voted For: *Troop*

troop: i think the punches were just....DECENT the best thing you had overall in my opinion was vocab flow was okay..........
1st bar was a aight personal slightly effective but somewhat played in my eyes. 2nd bar nice personal effective and pretty good. 3rd bar was okay...luckily you put this in EFL if you put it in front lines no one would know it lmfao.......................... 4th and final bar was PLAYED!!!didn't do well for the drop make it more creative because drugs isn't a good thing to use wordplay with nah mean! overall: 7/10

dopeman: basic drop nothing special and i'll explain why below 1st bar was not good at all....yeah it was a personal but not a very good one because GAY LINES=PLAYED obviously...... 2nd bar was a filler straight up honestly..........you didn't really diss him much. 3rd bar is your best bar because i get it and he throws on his "AI Chain" in replies sometimes............ 4th bar was wizack! honestly........personal concept=played and don't mention his "E-Jewelry"twice in a row....overall: 5.5/10

vote: troop

Sik Wit It 11-05-04 06:18 PM

Voted For: *Troop*

*Troop*’s Verse
Whuts My Name" Answer? Please state "Yea Yea" get the Term Rights
46Victories 29 Misses D get Devoured Often like PegLegs AroundTermites
^Decent openr here…
You got confident in Dominance when your Win stats hit around Thirty
Providing Ya "Fecee Aroma'd Verses" the only way u Drop "Dirty Dirty'
^haha…nice punch
Inaccurate testimonies of Angel Tendencies u don’t have no Destruction
Hault your functions like Writing after a Thumb and Index Finger Deduction
^eh…pretty decent hea…
"Whuts your Name? Beats me ask twice more and i reply wit a NopeMan
Digest these "Cocaine Laced Laxetivs" and still not Drop DopeMan
^pretty nice closer

Dopeman’s Verse
hes gay i got the proof, he wanted me in his ''backseat''...
lets see if this so called ''vet'' gets a win without bein a cheat
^eh…decent openr
the rumour is, you duck n whine to get wins...
so this where the real personals begin.....
^……….okay
hes pickin on femcee newbs, so add the bully tag to his name..
fuck rhymin, i'll make u suicidle by jackin your ''e-chain''...
^nice punch hea…
dumb lame, lady fiya is the closest thing u ever had to a girlfriend...
its aight tho, this kid got mad e-jewllery an much rv cash to spend..!!!
^erm…decent closer

Overall
haha…*Troop* took this one wit ease
had harder punches…a nice flow…and
a decent structure here…

Sik Wit It 11-05-04 06:19 PM

..*RTF* under my sig *Troop*
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hang-man 11-06-04 03:35 PM

vote: troop hands down won better flow better punches better verse plus i enjoyed it more the other guy thought he came dope but man that was an average verse not really up to par and i can see from now that i can take hi out as-well no-problem but yea back to this battle man u got ya ass hand it to u


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