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LyRi-CaLi 11-09-04 02:14 PM

Voted For: JoeyDrugsta

Joey nicely done.....
I think joey had this the whole way
Nice flow didnt seem to stop and some good punches
"how can it be that i can kick yer ass and still live in the burbs?
bitch i've had a tougher time puttin down herbs"
"in fact, imma smoke you, just like i did i bud
yer rhymes are neglected, need to show them more love"
Thought those were nice lines.......

Alpha didnt like the lay out hard to keep up with it......loose the flow

~Lady Fiya~ 11-13-04 01:22 AM

Voted For: JoeyDrugsta

Alpha X, imma leave you in check
imma put you in the dirt with my footprint on yer chest
^not bad.. for an opener..
the verse built up throughout, ur structure needed work but was enough to (in my opinion) KO alpha.. you had the better vocab, u need to add metas and multis and balance ur verse and u'll be str8.. but for this battle you took hold of all conceptz..


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