x u know Im coo with u now right I was fuckin with u I do it to everyone!!! and d u think its better than all those corny ass rhymes i uesd against u in our battle? :thumbup:

naw your stucture is messed up still...try and werk off my verse for are battle i had soem punches that were iight but my lines were forced a lil but i still merked you...and my stucture is perfect and flows perfect..

yo this crew anygoodz.... i jsut wanted to see if idd make it in cause i dunno what crew i wanna be in yet... heres a quick verse...

im complex..more wordplay than confusion in ur text/
i'll let loose and use boots to leave contusions on ya chest/
severly i'll slay ya sentences cause a homicide investigation/
be mindful of who you're facin..i'll leave eyes and anus adjacent/
but lets stick to tha facts..i stay twistin ya back/
treat ya spine like cocaine habbits..and stay addicted to crack/
double up this thug wit uppercuts thats rockin ya neck/
knockin the left side of ya jaw up to the top of ya head/
as far as disses go...they're gay please make them end/
cause u stay under the weather..especially when its rainin men/

i say in ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

does anyone else think i made it in??? :huh:

uppin for recruites..................

yeah he's raw, just sended him a pm.............

hey G:duece like this? if so lemme join but if no ill go away!



didnt ppl in school teach u not to fuck with me/
aint no one in any of my raps gonna get credibility/
to take me out your gonna need an organization/
so im takin your ass out by persuasion/
when u lose your gonna get kicked out ya crew and have a exclamation/
ill have u act different like a fluctuation/
man im gigantic/
ill be playin your ass as a gimmic/
man your shits old like a played out lyric/

lyric and gimmic dont rhyme right...and Gigantic didnt rhyme with anything in that verse..

For what it's worth in RIP..I vote No..

Keep improvin'...You need to up your game..

lyric and gigantic rhyme!!! :thumbup:

nah...they dont...the only similarity is the "ic" at the end..

Thats one of your problems...not JUST the last portion or peice of a word should rhyme with another, but the other word should rhyme with the WORD..not the ending...

For SHizzle Niggas Imma Keep It Long Beach

One(One)

ay yo im here.. whoeva pmed me you guys wanted to ask me sumfink?

kooboo=in

epic you want in wigga?