that shit was pretty good

i felt everything you was talkin bout

8.5/10

ok i feel you...but comon dont post on my thread with that..its hard enuff to get feed back.......so at least leave an opinion while u at it

also if u want recognition u gotta consistently prove ya self on this site not just battle but all the other shit too

i thought hotshh was better then this...hmm iunno bad stucture but you had to have rushed this cuz if you cant do better then this then ill be like damn but ight i guess 6.4/10

i like this verse......^^^oh well cant please em all..
no but the reason this might not be up to par with my other shit..at least in your opinion....is that i wrote this in 1999..i was getting kicked out of HS when i wrote this shit but shit X at least yoi paying attention

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