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Voted For: Eyvon
a battler, and a self glorifier punches- Eyvon cuz u had em personals- neither metas- Eyvon cuz u had em multis- neither structue- Eyvon just more consistency flow- Eyvon humor- Eyvon made me smile word play- neither Eyvon ok verse, lot of self glorification, but also a lot of punches. try some personals next time. Thug u had no punches, personals, multis, metas, etc... well wait u had one very weak punch. throw punches and elevate No Hate Just An Honest Voter v/Eyvon pz |
thank ya thank ya.... much thanx...
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Voted For: Eyvon
Eyvon got this... His verse was better....... You had bad structure but it was better than Demestiks..... You had some good flow... some hard witing punches and nice personals...... Demestik.. you need to elevate homie... No hate.... Peace~~ \/ \/ \/ Return tha fava in the sig! \/ \/ \/ |
Voted For: Eyvon
eyvon got this hands down, yo.....she murked you dawg...some of those lines didnt even rhyme....she simply came harder throughout.... my advice: eyvon....yo punches is good, you just need to up ya creativety and think out tha box....also, some of yo lines were a bit stretched, you can add multis to help that...keep it up yo... thuglife....you need to up ya whole game. you gonna get murked a lot droppin lyke that. you got tha vocab, and thats really all you got...keep battling and reading battles of tha better people.... PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLES.. |
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