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Voted For: Infamuz

i think u win this one cuz u had more complex ideas cbos were kinda simpple but this was a good battle ur punches hit harder and ur flow was better his kinda fell off in places where words didnt really rhyme but both were a good read i give u this vote on account of punches and flow man nice drop

vote on some of my unclosed battles

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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162974 thnx fam

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Voted For: C-Bo

Vote: c-bo

openign - bo
ebding - bo
personals - none
punches - tied
originality : bo
flow: bo

One dis really wit his closer

what the fuck


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Voted For: Infamuz

C-Bo

ohhh so ur a youngbuck there's no way this goof is mature..
he need to elevate a shitload - like tractors scoopin' manure..
(DECENT OPENER, PLAYED OUT THO...FLOW WAS CHOPPY...6/10)
and the loop is secure.............around ya neck-'n-tha-tree..
i'm afraid you're like a valet driver kid....all you get is a key..
(DECENT PUNCHES, FLOW WAS AIGHT...7/10)
am i'm stoppin ya breath? my verse is funny cuz this guy's in it..
u coulda had sex while i wrote it - took me less than 5 minutes..
(YOUR BEST BAR...FLOW WAS DECENT...PUNCHES WERE THERE...AND NICE PERSONAL...7/10)

AIGHT G...YOUR VERSE WASNT BAD FOR WHAT ITS WORTH...YOU NEED TO ELEVATE SOME...WORK ON FLOW, PUNCHES, WORDPLAY, MULTIES...YOU NEED TO GET MORE CREATIVE WITH YOUR SHIT...DONT MAKE IT LOOK RUSHED...YOU COULD HAVE TAKIN THIS IF YOUR VERSE WAS A BIT MORE RAW...

Infamuz

bo, Dawg You Couldn't Be Intelligent If Your Whole~Verse~Was~Bold...
Fuck Undertakers Or Incinerators I'll Give You Your Own~Hurse~To~Hold...
(DECENT OPENER...NICE MULTIE USE, FLOW WAS AIGHT, NICE WORDPLAY AS WELL...8/10)

Your Raps About As Corny As Ya Dick After You Fuckin~Men...
I Got Lead In These Caps Fuck Bullets I'll Have You Duckin~Pens...
(OKAY BAR, PLAYED OUT KINDA...DECENT PUNCH AND FLOW WAS AIGHT...7/10)

This Guys New2~Tha~Game...I'm Sick, Like Some One Spewed~On~My~Brain...
nigga~You~Are~Lame, I'm A Devour The Earth Like I Was Chewin~Ya~Name...
(SICK LINE MAYNE...GOOD CLOSER...YOU COULD HAVE MADE THIS AND ALL OF YOUR BARS MORE RAW IF YOU SPENT MORE TIME ON IT...8/10...YOUR BEST BAR I THINK)

CHEA...OK, YOUR FLOW WAS OK...EXCEPT FOR THE STOP AND GO SHIT...TRY NOT TO USE ~ ALL THE TIME...MAKES YOUR WORDS LOOK PLAYED OUT AND RETARTED...GET STR8 TO THE POINT MAYN...YOU HAD GOOD PUNCHES THROUGHOUT THE VERSE, BUT NOTHING SPACTACULAR REALLY...IF YOU WERE TO GO AGAINTS SOMEONE LIKE EMPIRE OR TROOPER YOU WOULD GET SLAUGHTERED...YOU AS WELL NEED TO ELEVATE SOME...OTHER THAN THAT MAN, GOOD BATTLE...KEEP IT UP...

RETURN THE FAVOR ON MY BATTLE POSTED IN THE SIG...PAYDAY KILLIN LIL CHUBBS...THANKS PEEPS...~1~

Voted For: Infamuz

Pheww!!! Look whos Talkin Bout elevation LOL nawl im jus Jookin But I Give my vote to Infamous Bcuz He Clearly Had betta Word play And His Structure and punchez were defenitly Betta ****NO HATE***%ALL RESPECT%***** But Thats Jus the way I feel Ok I Really Think you both did great but i can only give my vote to one person and that person is Infamous
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Please return the favor......I prefer My battle Against Yung~Deedz ( Please vote in that one first ) Bcuz I Need that easy ass Win ***But Vote honestly***
Thanx
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