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This was feedback posted for Dabatos
 

yo dis was aiight but ya structa wasnt dat good but
u got good wordplay

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Voted For: CriTiC

WHOA!!!! dope as shyt kidd... so sikk... smashed him... everythin flowed rite on point... perfect structure... vocab to make peepl break out they dictionaries... shyt was so tite yo... dope... closer killed it...

v/critic

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Voted For: CriTiC

gotta go wit critic...he got more into depth with the topic...i liked his use of vocab....this was really close though

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