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wiil return un favour....,.,.

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Voted For: Tstorm

Sup this is how I see it,,...

T doped some fire on this kid,.. opener was nice and
right on point and the close smashed it.

Used good vocab nice wordplay and drop a solid decent
verse.

Best bar,,...

why they call you re-loaded?...coz it takes you a year to fire?
with your skills...we`ll be waiting so long, rapverse will expire!
^LMAO Personal nice flow hard hitting punch.


Reload,,... You verse was really basic and very predictable
flowed we but that was about it. Vocab didn't really have
any. No wordplay and the punches played like a bitch.

Best Bar...
i aint even trying to win im just having fun/
you can stop crying cause im done/
^Coz the verse was over^

Elevate man..

Vote ~ T total miss match reload got raped...

upping for5 some votes..............

Reload if you wanna battle holla @ me,...

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Voted For: Tstorm

vote: tstorm....

REloaded this is how it is....
1) do not type ya verse like this...

im gonna kill ya blood spill-ya
if i tossed ya finger at ya buddy, still no-one feel's-ya /

^^ that look NOOBISH N weak N stupid dont skip a line just cuz u made a bar keep it going like tstome did peep hes verse he droped N u'rs the way it looks tstorm looks better so-far befor i even looked at what ya actully wrote....

2) get more creative N more detail punches...

your not a storm your just a breeze/
im bout to win this battle with ease/ (-- thats ya first bar N there was no personal no punch just slef-glorifying ya-self which is weak in a battle.....

wtf?..dumb herb setting this battle up before i even agreed?
well...with a 3-8 record,thats the only time uve taken a lead!
there was a nice personal there N punch thats how u start off a battle N continue to do so thru out the verse...

if u add multis ya verse would be a better read or if u got creative punches that would help also...
basicly think out the box N think of some out-rages shit u feel me...

all around tstome verse was a better read better punches better flow N all... 8.0

reloaded u need to elevate still try some open mic first N drop something RAW as if u was coming at someone sometime that can help u think outside the box........

im just trying to help u out reloaded insted of just say stomr won thats it...

keep them coming u will get better....

can u drop a honest vote fellas on these battles...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=159406
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=156157

uppin this thread.
drop ya links.
will return all votes.

Voted For: Tstorm

haha nice first line homie ill give u this vote u had better punches and structure better vocab and rhymes overall man u got this shyt kidd

vote on this one

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162845

This was feedback posted for Reloaded
 

just checking polls..................

Voted For: Tstorm

TStorm:
You Came Firing With Insane Personals And punches.. Your Verse Was Off The Chain..
highlights: Personals, punches and Your Wordplay.


Relloaded:
Your Verse Was Very Very Simple. No Good Punches Or Personals. And your Wordplay wasnt there.
highlights: your structure was your best part of your verse.


this vote was easy from start to finish as Tstorm took it from beginer to closer.. good job..


Please Return The Favor by casting a vote in one of the battles in my sig.. they have been open for a while and need closing thanks alot.. it will be returned if you vote.. Thanks!

Voted For: Tstorm

ok bad battle i think i could have fallin a sleepbut here it is

flow t
style both
punches hard to decide but t
personal hard to decide and i gave the last one to t so reload you get it
vocab t
mults t
winner t