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return the favour in my open mic,>misunderstood.
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nice drop.
your emotion in this is on point. your rhyme's are tight. structure is good. I went and read this twice..lol.. nice drop keep them coming. |
yo uppin..
.. I aways get only one nomination..cuz nobody sees it |
Shit was sick... 9/10... Felt the emotion... Took me a while to find your structure... Sickest part is the Chorus... Nice drop!
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nice shit 10/10
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nominate it for best open mic then iight?
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..uppin for votes..
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7/10 was alright........
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Your Flow And Structure Are Garbage...
That Needs To Be Fixed Cuz It Doesnt Read Right... But Your Content, Emotion, And Storyline Was Nice... That Other Shit Needs To Be Fixed Though... You Need Atleast Keep A Steady BASIC Flow... You Dont Even Need A Complex Rhym Scheme... Just Something More Stable Then What You Have... Stay Up And Keep Writing... .One. |
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