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Voted For: Elemental Soul

this was a very close battle....

vocab was good from both of u....good multis from both of u.....elemental had more inners which i thought made it a lot more interesting to read....structure was good from both of u....but i thought elements was a bit better......i felt that some of dabatos lines were stretched.....dabatos was easier to understand but i thought that it was a bit too easy and understandable....it was too simple......honestly element...when i read this....it was like i was reading one of the best pieces of work i have ever read....it was truly a great verse....not that dabatos wasnt good....but i just think that element got him pretty easy on this one...

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Voted For: Dabatos

v/dabatos
i think this was a very intresting topic an u both went on about it good but i think dabato had this one cause he had more vocab an wordplay i liked elemental's also it was close but dabato gets tha win, no hate son
return the favor..................

yo dabatos stop acting surprised when someone votes for me nigga......at least i spelled plague right. this battle is pretty close so just keep it cool.whoever wins,wins.
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Voted For: Elemental Soul

yo Elemetal Soul gets this one hands down. He had a better flow and a nive vocabulary. his was also easier to read so he gets my vote. Dabatos had a nice flow but it was simple. No Hate just an honest vote.

oh wow, you are hott, who are you?? i never took the time to actually read ur verse till now, and it was dope as hell, i went to easy on u, shyt, i shouldn't have keyed dis one.. rematch??lol

Voted For: Dabatos

dabtos i thought urs was more complex overall i felt es's verse had quite a few played lines i was feeling ur structure i like how u broke it into seperate peices and ur lines were really ever
i personally think ur ending was great
It's been 1 year since that event, and half the country has been wiped out...
I have no family alive now, and geting rid of this disease i have high doubts...
At times I cry about, how i could of saved my family from takin that shot...
Because that shot was givin by terrorists, which was never to be stopped...

however i wasnt really feeling this part right herer
After two more months of fear, it's said no people has had the infection....
Death rates have lessend, but 2 be sure, everyone must get an anti-injection..

elemental soul ur verse was good ur flow was better than dabatos but i felt hers was more complex more creative and had a better structure

this line was really good nice multis flowed goo and its really true
Stuck in poverty,causing the animosity of honesty,
So obviously,our only hopes are winnin the lottery,

i wasnt feelin this line its really played
I want the ones who struggle to unite,fight for your piece,
I want Crips to shake the hands of Bloods,cutting your leash,

ok so im gonna give it to dabatos es had a better flow but thats about it his lines were played dabtos was more creative her structure was better also but good battle to both

vote - Dabatos

Voted For: Dabatos

story - definitely dabatos.. had the killer story, ES didnt really have one

vocab - ES

flow - tie.. both were pretty good.. not perfect tho

imagery - dabatos.. perfect imagery


overall: both came well in this one, but dabatos just came crazy nice.. perfect imagery and story-telling.. reminded me of Immortal Technique.. and thats a HUGE compliment.. so keep it up both of you..

V/Dabatos