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4fil 11-08-04 10:11 PM

uppin for some votes! you faggot you went over the given amount of lines!

th-C 11-08-04 10:24 PM

Voted For: Phyzicks

phyz
ok, nothing eye opening, but you had connecting punches.. the 'deliever/paper' concept is kinda played.. your verse wasn't all that great.. but enough to win.

young
bad flow/structure... it seemed like your first half your verse didnt even rhyme! threw off everythig and I couldn't feel the punches you were trying to throw because there was nothing to go off of.

Return the favor please.
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~Lady Fiya~ 11-08-04 11:59 PM

Voted For: Phyzicks

u had the better closer.. nice opener too.. lol very funny verse.. it was short but hard-hitting enuff to knock young one out.. good job.. you get my vote..
pz..

The Militant 11-09-04 01:52 AM

Voted For: Phyzicks

phyzicks verse was short but was tight nice wordplay ight rhming was kinda basic but still nice structre was good
best line-hope you aint to young cause killing kids is new to me
But if you are… I’ll have your life ended before puberty
young one came weak not many ounches and the ones ha had hit kinda soft rhyming was tight not many perssonals so i went with the better puncehes and meatas
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