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intensify effect 11-11-04 09:41 AM

Voted For: hang-man

i dout this young one spit out da net,
cuz he been on da web longer then spidas on house arrest /
that was good.. N best line in this battle...

my style brutal like a gang of angry thug's
thats waiting to put more arms around ya THEN A GROUP HUG /
good one again...

not a bad verse and probley could elevate in the future flow good creativeness was ok all around not bad... 7.2 outta 10

the other guy had no qouteables had no punches diss was ok flow was ok creativeness was weak and everything else i just wasnt feeling it at all... 4.0 outta 10..

vote HANG-MAN

JRoy 11-16-04 10:01 PM

Voted For: hang-man

ok nuff said.....hang man came away with this one...the reasons

His Vocab was more complex...it was as SIMPLE as ur verse was Young One...it was nice yea...but it needz some work....Also the structure was bad on both of ya'lls you need to start lookin at the way people write ther stuff...the flow if anything went to hang man it didn't drag on as much in the lines...and the mulites weren't really there for either and this battle overall was "DECENT

SO my vote hang man

Ill-Grammatix 11-23-04 08:57 AM

Voted For: hang-man

too easy...

youngone... how da heck are we supposed to know what's supposed to rhyme? that shyt looks like a wild ass run-on sentence... ya need to fix that... seperate ya lines... read a book every now and then... ya grammar's all jacked... half the shyt made no sense...

hang-man (even though ya came in my crew forum beefin)
this shyt was waaaay too easy for ya... ya opener was on point... i liked that shyt about the spider on house arrest....
the group hug bar was on point, too... ain't really feelin' all the thugged out lyrics but those two lines stood out the most... dame dash/rocafella lines are kinda played... other than the omma thug attitude this shyt was pretty decent and was more than enough to win this


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