UUUUUUUUUUUpppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn.. .......

Still uppppppppppiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...........c mon people.....

UUUUUUpppppppppinnnnnnn.......this battle be slept on .....cmon people......

This was feedback posted for D Fury
 

^good luck with this one.. ;) A.I. reppers.. cuz..

Dayum....How come this nigga aint uppin this....Cmon people...Upppinn...this battle be old as hell.....just leave a link then ...and ill vote on your battles honestly...peace...

Voted For: D Fury

Wicked got this one...... Your verse was way beter... your punches hit harder than hangs....... I like it .. your flow wasnt all that goiod.. you could work on that.... Hang your structure was pretty good.......But you could work on it too....... And over all.. I say Wicked got this shyt....

Return tha fava in tha sig~ ( Please! )

Voted For: hang-man

gotta go with hang-man....his punches were harder then wicked-ones....and he had alot of wordplay in his verse....good verse man

please return tha favor..............

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Voted For: D Fury


Wanted like a criminal for treason,Im tearin up pieces for no reason...
This is the season to stop dis kid from breathin...
decent
I'll leave his tracks insurrectioned with voodoo raps he'll be vexed with...
This fag cant hear meso I'll hit him with this text shit...
decent
Best wit thought he was man enough to test this...
I'll flex then and leave him stirred up like Nest-quick...
ok
Expect it this kid's done stepped in the wrong ring...
Yeah I'm foecussed so no you ain't winning a damn thing..
ok
So I don't know why you even wanted to test me...
The rap Allen Iverson your games bitch like Lisa Leslie...
ok
My hatreds relentless...
Extend you defenses cross over jump shot at the buzzer to end this...
No
punches were decent
flow was aight…
structure was okay
didn’t see no personals…
decent drop 4/10

Comin' after me and you'll be Chasin' Murda fa'Real,
Yellin your name in my ear but i never Heard'of ya Still /
no
my vicous attact to ya raps leave ya trap shut tight
got D furyious that im here like visitors at 2am @ night /
ok
bang-ya-head off N shut off ya lights N start wilding
use a mashady to rip ya intest'in out N use'em to play da violin /
ok
Face'It, Any verse you post I make you wanna Replace'It,
Say'Shit Gay'Bitch i'll Make'It so you need a Face'Lift /
no
Left you Nak'ed Beatin Bleedin not Breathin ya family Grievin,
2 emcees'In this battle but im tha only one Leavin /
no
Been a Demon since tha Semon emceein since i was Teathin,
and You woke up this morning but you'll lay slain before this Evenin /
No
decent punches too…
flow was okay
structure was okay
persona’s were aight
vocab was aight…
decent drop…3.9/10