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4fil 11-14-04 06:59 PM

Voted For: intensify effect

You make me “laugh” the way you freepost and just get ignored…
Its “funny” how u think your tough like the trucks made by Henry Ford…
^^^^weak opener...
Shit you crack me up with ur wack ability’s, damn u try to “hard”…
Even when ur “forcing” a fatty to come out ur still a piece of lard…
^^^DRY!
21 years old still on a “rap-site” u sicken me and still in violent type…
I couldn’t “vision” u “spin” on a table cuz ur shit aint fresh and ripe…
^^^mmm, pretty average...
Why don’t u leave a little to “old” and u still cant pack a punch…
Violent type the “youngest” crew and still an annoying bunch…
weak closer

xclusive!! “laugh” “funny" “old” “youngest”
is that what you call wordplay??? cause thats just fucked up ok!
bars were really strectched so pretty wack flow and structure wasnt that great... punches pretty soft, no real good ideas newhere... you need to be more creative

Talk Smack N i'll put gorillas on ya back like Minks-on-Puffy...
blow ya brain to the ceiling so u can Think-Above-Me...
^^^lol... a bit violent but that last line was nice
SON-Me?.. Never when u'r fake-style easy to spot like dots on lepord...
X Desperit to show off... so he add hes Street battles to hes N.E.T Record...
^^^ mmm dont really like it but not bad
and it's aint "timberland designe"... when i send "Lead-throu-He's-Red-Shirt"...
so i'll end ya befor u get "2 carryed away" like "Twins-On-A-Stretcher"....
^^^lol, good idea but needed better xecution
so better off battleing me during my first audio interludes....
cuz honestly U Can't Fuck With Me... like ya girl during her Men-U-Struls....
^^^^ dont like it
now X just go R.I.P... cuz im a Violent Type that just plated this crew like a flouris...
cuz Competition for me doesnt Exist like a Weed-a-soares....
^^^^ dry..... wack.... wtf so funny i forgot to laugh!

ie. lines also a bit strectched... i like your opener though... just that line could have merked xclusive
return the favour ok... laters!

DrasticMeasureZ 11-14-04 09:41 PM

This was feedback posted for intensify effect
 
.................................................. ........MERKED.......word.........da truth has spoken

Parallel 11-14-04 09:51 PM

^and thats word...IE you dick ryder...............

intensify effect 11-15-04 04:49 PM

^^ why u hate'in N already deleting votes??
haha now whos bitching about what??
u got SONNED TAKE IT LIKE A MAN...

upp'in this battle to end this fool already....

Parallel 11-15-04 06:34 PM

^man unexplained you think your good d/ring your nothing but a coward...

intensify effect 11-16-04 12:24 AM

^^ shut up N stop talking while u'r currently getting WHORED V.T STYLE......

Jay-SmileZ 11-16-04 10:42 AM

Voted For: intensify effect

Won by mile...punches, word play was otrocious on intesity...

"blow ya brain to the ceiling so u can Think-Above-Me..."


"so i'll end ya befor u get "2 carryed away" like "Twins-On-A-Stretcher"...."


"cuz honestly U Can't Fuck With Me... like ya girl during her Men-U-Struls.... *menstrual=period*"

These rymes aren't for a guy whos 28 an 27...i see people who have way better records an dont rymes half as good...there must be some serious dick riding going on or you just elevated....

All lines hit hard

No Mercy:::i didnt understand ya lines...you had some personals but they were too basic...

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Dex 11-16-04 11:31 AM

This was feedback posted for ...Xclusive...
 
I.E got fucking licked big style!

How does that feel?? shit il never have to sweat about battling you, that'll be fun!

intensify effect 11-16-04 11:36 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by WeeDex
I.E got fucking licked big style!

How does that feel?? shit il never have to sweat about battling you, that'll be fun!


STOP FREE-POSTIN in here...

WHAT A HOMO THING TO SAY...
I GOT LICKED!!!!!!!!!
WTF IS THAT????

stop free-post'in in here or i will have u BANND....

Parallel 11-16-04 01:10 PM

stop d/ring IE you dick head............................

Oz™ 11-16-04 03:53 PM

Hahahahahaha.....this bitch cryin already

tryna beat VT but a chance you'll never have,
Cuz IE's driving you crazy like the man in ur av,

Biatch.....

Gettin murked VT style

intensify effect 11-18-04 07:25 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by MeN-Iz
Hahahahahaha.....this bitch cryin already

tryna beat VT but a chance you'll never have,
Cuz IE's driving you crazy like the man in ur av,

Biatch.....

Gettin murked VT style


hahaha tell him MEN-IZ......
fuck'in herb....

tech its 4-0 but its 3-0 upp'in this joint to end already....

N i just wanna say something real quick about this battle:

U about to get KNOCK'ED DA FUCK OUT.....
:shoot: :help: :laugh2:

jr freeze 11-19-04 05:15 PM

Voted For: intensify effect

v/IE he gets my vote cause he had harder punchs an multi's he came harder to me .....two by four u were good but didn't come as hard...
(Talk Smack N i'll put gorillas on ya back like Minks-on-Puffy...
blow ya brain to the ceiling so u can Think-Above-Me...) i liked this line..it was prettty tight.....

hang-man 11-19-04 08:09 PM

Voted For: intensify effect

Talk Smack N i'll put gorillas on ya back like Minks-on-Puffy...
blow ya brain to the ceiling so u can Think-Above-Me...

oo shit that was ill and raw just what i like

and it's aint "timberland designe"... when i send "Lead-throu-He's-Red-Shirt"...
so i'll end ya befor u get "2 carryed away" like "Twins-On-A-Stretcher"....
oo that shit was nasty as fuck hot bar

so better off battleing me during my first audio interludes....
cuz honestly U Can't Fuck With Me... like ya girl during her Men-U-Struls
that was aight

and the last bar was dumb and weak weed-a-soares?? talk about trying to hard to get original



You make me “laugh” the way you freepost and just get ignored…
Its “funny” how u think your tough like the trucks made by Henry Ford…
henery ford WTF weak as fuck

21 years old still on a “rap-site” u sicken me and still in violent type…
I couldn’t “vision” u “spin” on a table cuz ur shit aint fresh and ripe…
last line was dumb and weak and the rest of ya verse got even weaker so i wont go on with this vote

EastCoast 11-20-04 11:32 PM

Voted For: intensify effect

intensify just came harder....even though we in rival crews my vote goes to him...i give em his props...ive seen xclusive do better..wut happened...x just didnt have good punches..ie had better punches wordplay and personals...x had better flow but thats about all...this goes to intensify effect(no love OR hate)........

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