Voted For: oreo

lol oreo kills bizzy...bizzy..... wack! you need some wordplay man and some tricky shit...u 'bout 2 get found FACE-DOWN when the BASS POUNDS,
my strategies BREAK GROUNDS;
^^ wtf!
that's how i SPARK SOME FEAR,
u try 2 rhyme, but u studder like epileptic AUCTIONEER/
^^^na!!! you need to elevate... your shits to simple...
oreo.. kill him well done

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Voted For: Bizzy

Aii I Think This Was A REAL Battle

Bizzy
Is Clearly (to Me ) The Winner But Heres Why
The Punches and Personals Where Jus Exqusiute And The Why You Could Catch His Flow N Rythm And Jus Fly Through His Verse And That Last Line Jus Put The Icing On The Cake Plain And Simple

Oreo
Ya Verse Was Hot But Bizzy's Verse Was Hotter (NO Hate) Yo Did Better Than I Wouldve Done For Sure (MAd Respect for You) I Woulve Lost Like Well.......LOst LOL But It seemz To Me Like You Need To Up Ya Personals Fo sho Yall Plz Do The Rii Thing And Vote in My Battle I MEan I Took The Time To Vote on Your Battles The LEast You Could Do Is Return The FAvor

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Voted For: oreo

A'ight...a decent battle. Bizzy...you NEED to change your structure. It is hard to read, and it doesn't flow that great...punches were okay, but the verse was structured so badly that it wasn't even really enjoyable to read...Oreo came with some nice punches and he actually had a structure to his verse. Flow was good, rhyme scheme could be a little better.

Vote- Oreo

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This was feedback posted for oreo
 

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