Voted For: frein-ma$ter

yo u was hot your rhymes really make sense keep it up. HOLLA

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to JMS flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, F-M had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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I know its a lil weak but its ok
Please return the favor
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Voted For: jmsbnd07655

Wow tHis was very One sided

PUnchez...007
Personals.007
multi's.......007
Meta's.....007
Vocab......007
Structure....007

So there You Have it folks i hope i helped in a good way ...........now RTF in my Battle against Hang-man Please
Thank you you are so kind

This was feedback posted for frein-ma$ter
 

if i could vote id vote for u came a lil more basi ur structure was better although u need to seperate ur bars into lines lol ur punches were wittier can u hit up my battle id vote but i cant because i dont have enough posts it would be most appreciated ill return the favor once i have enoough votes

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

yeah im votin for frein-master,both verses were kinda soft
like yall werent tryin,um der werent really any personals,tha punches came but master came harder
mah favorite:Just my presence leaves this fake-fag-shook..J's devoured like an early meal...his style I BREAK-FAST..look.
Punches land..u can't sustain-mad-hooks..quickly dispose of this cat..he's NO PROBLEM like BLANK-MATH-BOOKS.
the structures were off creativness lacked but it was cool

*return da fava*

Voted For: jmsbnd07655

not a very strong battle but it was good on both sides i fell jms took this one his punches hit a lil harder his structre and flow were kinda off but his metas were good
best line-yo, you aint a master, you're a disaster case,i'll smash your face,
im rippin up the mic gettin your fag shit laced, i'll trash your place,
return the favor....