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Abraxas 11-15-04 08:25 PM

Voted For: E Looch

Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
wtf.... naw i wasnt feeling that one.. coulda been rewroded
Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
lol this was a good punch
Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
nope.. not a good one... ti was iigh though
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
lol... good punch..
One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
ok loser.. coulda ben reworded to amek a stronger pucnh


put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
weak opener didnt like this
small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
nice pucnh kinda weak though
reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
this wasnt that good.. wasnt feelign it
just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
ddint like the end the swetup was goood...
life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
strong closer....

loooch came weak as fuck in this battle troop came weak too...but loooch managed to eadge this one out by a few...
Vote looch...

~Luciano~ 11-16-04 12:22 AM

yea uppin 4 some non dickrides on this fake ass vet

fluidmoon 11-16-04 01:12 AM

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 
dope drop fam......without a doubt troop.............1

E Looch 11-16-04 03:18 PM

^^^ this kid lol talkin about d/r

u shouldnt recieve 1 vote on that gay verse everything was played out

my name dont rhyme with mooch first off and u said sommethin about mimes?LMAO

your weak go back to frontlines with that verse

uppin for more honest explained votes

headgames 11-16-04 03:46 PM

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 
just uppin this shit, too close so I didnt vote :)

E Looch 11-16-04 11:09 PM

uppin

^wasnt close

me=clever lines
troop=played and boring

L.E 11-17-04 01:33 PM

Voted For: E Looch

This was a very hot battle...the punches and flow were tied, and it was one of the most hottest battles I have seen on this site. Punches were hot on both sides...personals was dope...but E Looch takes it for a slightly harder verse. No hate.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Ambient 11-17-04 01:53 PM

Voted For: E Looch

*Troop*

Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
nice opener
Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
lol...decent punch i guess 7.5/10
Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
decent meta...nice 7.5/10
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
best bar...nice personal..8.5/10
One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
nah..wasn't a good closer...6.5/10

u had some decent punches...nothing great. but decent. maybe u should of swapped some bars coz the opener was weak. no great punches. had some nice metas. actually most of the verse was meta? overall an average verse.

E Looch

put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
could of bin better worded but this was a creative punch.8.5/10
small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
not feelin it...6.5/10
reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
lol...nice, i got it. 9/10
just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
structure is blah but woah...that was witty. 9/10
life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
real nice setup...but i excpected more from the punch..hmm 7.5/10

locch had a real nice consistant verse with a few nice personal....and dope metas. Troop had decent punches but most of it was similies...

v/ E Looch

da kidd 11-17-04 05:35 PM

[SIZE=4]i feel my man e looch but i rip all yall try me i'm good

~Luciano~ 11-18-04 12:55 AM

didnt kno u could drop weak and still get votes but fuck it
Im still an allaround better lyricist than him

La Cosa Nostra 11-18-04 05:03 AM

Voted For: *Troop*

Alright look. Neither were.. Amazingly dope.. Troop you had nice structure, a little stretched but it worked fine. A decent text type of flow. Nice vocab, Need to work on the punches, Ive seen you drop better then these in the past.

As for E looch.. Dude, before you talk, I understood the punches. They just... Were weird.. I hope you were just having an off day or something dude cuz I seen average people drop that sort of battle verse before. Little to no structure... weird punches that didnt really hit hard at all. It really wasnt that dope.. At all..

And you can say all you like brutha, I dont really care. Im just being honest.

V- Troop

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Mad Dog 11-18-04 06:48 AM

Voted For: *Troop*

*Troop*

Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
/\ an ok opener but could be better

Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
/\ no real punch there more a personal there

Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
/\ lol nice punch there

You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
/\ mime lines are played but after that good punch

One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
/\ aight closer but could be better

E-Looch

put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
/\ opener could be better

small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
/\ average punch nothing special

reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
/\ 1st line self-glory 2nd line ok punch/personal

just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
/\ good punch but ya style is all over the place as structure goes

life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
/\ closer again coulda been better

Overall to be honest i wasn't impressed wit this battle...both are respected members up here this shoulda been a battle worth talkin about for ages...but instead it was at best average...*Troop* got the flow and structure because E-Looches was all over the place and the 3 line bar although my style was like that once...it's jus hiding a stretched bar...the punches and personals weren't anything killer...but *Troops* 10 viewing 11 punch was prolly the best one there...other than that this was an average battle by 2 vets who are expected to deliver much more...this was my honest opinion...so my vote is for *Troop* RTF in ma sig either the battle or the song i don't mind :thumbup:

GangsStarShit 11-18-04 08:13 AM

This was feedback posted for E Looch
 
viewing the votes.................................

Critic 11-18-04 08:49 AM

This was feedback posted for E Looch
 
Dame this was a fuckin hott battle, just droping feedback
as I can't vote but E come sick in this shit.

Stay up both Troop come hott aswell.

1~

~Luciano~ 11-18-04 12:38 PM

upppin.......................


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