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Godz Angel 11-17-04 12:47 PM

Voted For: ~*Legend*~

Legend got this....... Heroic... Ya lines were streched way too much... Legend you hit really hard with those punches and personals...... I like it...... You bath has Somehwat good flow..... but legemnd takes this with his punches...

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Hoodz Prophet 11-18-04 12:42 AM

Voted For: Heroic Verse

Heroic
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Punches And Personals Was Hitting On Target,Personals Was Hitting Also,Man OverAll Flow Was Damaging Good Shit Vocab And All,Structure Wasnt To Decent But OverAll Cool8/10
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Legend
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The Fuck More Like You Bin Dissing Epic,Lmao,But Vocab Was Decent Punches Wasnt To Much On Him Decent Structure Not ALot Of Personals To Him6/10

Heroic Verse 11-19-04 12:01 PM

Upping This Battle.................................

Heroic Verse 11-19-04 10:26 PM

Upping This Shit..........................................

Heroic Verse 11-20-04 09:47 PM

Upping............................................ .....

Heroic Verse 11-21-04 12:49 PM

Upping............................................ ...

Heroic Verse 11-22-04 06:13 PM

Upping FOr Votes Please Lol Lets Get This Battle DOne Real Quick

Heroic Verse 11-23-04 05:39 PM

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Heroic Verse 11-24-04 05:26 PM

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Morpheus 11-25-04 03:13 AM

This was feedback posted for Heroic Verse
 
k dis was a good battle by both-but i still think heroic came out on top of dis one-it flowed and the rhymes were sick man keep it up.

Mistic-Rogue 11-25-04 03:21 AM

This was feedback posted for ~*Legend*~
 
legend.... stretched lines... just work on that..... checking polls

Parallel 12-15-04 08:35 PM

Voted For: ~*Legend*~

Heroic Verse:
ok man well this was a dumb verse you had you had like some mab steched lines and a really bad stucture to it with weak punchlines and also weak vocabulary and a mad savage no flow to your verse...try using some witty metaphores to your lines with funny comics to it but try not to use porn flicks or any gay shit saying the guys gay or something cuz thats wack...but you had a nice nothing to your verse...sry kid elevation is the key..No Hate

Legend:
not bad man well sense this is one of your first battles on rv this wasent to bad you didnt reallly use any witty punches but you had a good damn flow to it with a weird thing to your lines lol i do not know what it is but its pretty kool...a real nice stucture with soem dope witty metaphoes in there...

Vote: Legend

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