1st kid = work on your word pronunciation

2nd dude = same shit an work on flow

3rd cat = same thing + work on qaulity

Im feelin this beat....shits dope.


First Verse...The accent takes a second to get used to.. but the voice is pretty good. Seems a little uninspired get more into it.. But its good...

Second Verse... same thing the voice is good but it takes some time to vibe with it.. flow is off and on.. Lyrics is coo.. Not to bad

Third Verse.... A bit more hype then everyone else.. kinna throws me off... that pop on the mic sounds bad.. but the quality doesnt take away...this flow is hott.. word...

This was a pretty good Listen..Entertaining... Good Drop All

uppin this for feed

the collabo was cool... but y'all need to check out noobies is pointles!!!... that shyt is funny as hell!!! (sorry x-clusive...lol)... the shyt had me on the floor!.. werd... good shyt OMB!

Word to the Newbies song and uppin...

*listening*

Feeling the beat a little. Hook sound nice, went well with the beat. First guy came in a little too loud. Need a little more emotion too. Sounds kinda like you're just reading the shit instead of rapping.......flow was cool though. Definately too loud though. Second guy needed to lose a little effect.....too much on his voice. Needs to use some mic etiquite too......he's loud at some points, but soft at others. Third was pretty loud. Nice emotion though. Flow was cool. Overall this was an ok track, just needed a little help on the production side. Keep Droppin :thumbup:

Im still hungry

still humgry...

god damn... nostra even spits liek tupac... nos, your dope... thats word...


i liked this song.. everyone in it rocked the nice smooth beat.. i love this sbeat... and ya'll was jammin :). good shit all og you.. omb u elevated hellas since i been away.. i get my thanksgiving break tuesday.. we can do our song then.. iv been so busy.. sorry man.. you know my nigga.. i just aitn been on much.. all break its be an you nigglet ;)

Told ya Nos :thumbup: ....

Uppin this for more

yeah the quality wasnt too great....................

..the accent wasnt too bad but it was pretty good overall..........

...........i think some emotion would help with ur song.............

uppin this.....

hook is dope nas verse is aight as ive already told him wasnt feeling the second verse aight though first verse was best but none good i think that beat and hook couldve been done better yall should do that over

Just a question, why dont you ever use full stops?