ROFLLLLLLL^^^^......sinner~this wasnt bad, like seven said, the quality needs work, it really makes the track that much better...your flow is good, you improved a lot,keep it up man, and you'll be better in no time,1

thanks for the love.... but I do realise that I have to improve my sound quality and my spit to make it more used to flowing to the beat but Im just practicing and I had fun practicing on mad dog he's an easy target lol because he dissed me...

Kid, u still sound like shit.




PERIOD.

tha q only fags say shit like that and guess what you are....

U elevating a bit kid.. keep it up.

its disses like these that make me wonder why i'm still here?...better luck next time

You Improved.

You went from very shit to just shit...

OK... flow was hella choppy... like.. you stopped and started a lot.. voice had no confidence or emotion... Quality was ass.. some punches made me laugh... not laugh because they were funny, but because they were wack.. i think it was that "boob, noob, boob-tube" one, or something... hahaha.. anyway.. yeah..

keep elevating.. Use "noise reduction" and "Hiss Reduction" to improve your quality... also it might be smart to do a little dynamics processing to level out the waves..

Work on emotion.. and try to flow better.. (not choppy)

...this was... crap...flowed well i suppose, u talked way to fast.... some rappers can pull off the fast rap, but you aint no busta rhymes, twista etc. they can pull off the fast rhymes... and u blew into the mic to much.... any way..... anybody sinner bitch?

anybody sin a clown? fuck off bitch otherwise i'll drop a diss on your ass that'll wish you were never born mutha fucker the problem occured because i didn't get rid of the noice reduction im only new to cool edit so fuck off bitch go kill yaself.... fuckin clown

lol accept my call out then bitch... drop any sort of diss you want to bitch... dont bother me in the least, especialy after i heard this garbage

I wasn't really feelin this..ya flow was way off..and yea....its quality sounds worse then anything i've ever heard