good shyt fiya!... i'm impressed with this being ya first audio drop!... ok... ya verse was on point as far as the lyrics go... i heard dudes who couldn't flow with the beat the way you did and they claim they good and been doing it for a grip... so props for that... flow and lyrics...

only thing i saw that really needs improvement is ya delivery... put some more feeling into it... act like ya in a heated argument or sum'n... whatever ya gotta do to put that sum'n extra in ya joint... soft voice don't matter if you tryna come hard... ya shyt'll stand out if ya really mean what you spitting... try practicing in different tones... and change ya inflection on certain parts of ya verse until ya feel comfortable with it...

other than that... keep doing what ya do and fuck da haters... you off to a really good start

thanx boo boo... heee heee, it's bad cuz my voice is real high, i'm originally a singer.. but uhmm i toned it down, a lil'.... i can redo that fa real, but u kno... when i get a good chance, thanx fa teh feedback, get at me, nikka..

listening.....u sound like somebody i know. ur emotion is decent- still needs improving...nice voice. Quality can be improved. Lyrics were decent.

nice drop anyway...keep droppin....Fiya. lol

word.. another lady emcee for audio in A.I.. what im talkin bout.. for a first drop mommy, you doin ya thang.. flow was good for the most part.. fell off a lil bit.. but a first drop.. so thas gonna happen. and it will happen more in the future.. but u holdin us down ma.. keep droppin

i kno, thanx calamity.. much respectz.. i took did that drop in two takes, one while i was on pills, and this was the second time.. rofl.. i could redo it sumtime, but i like it being a rough draft for a first.. thanq and cosmos..-thanq boi..

Ok Lotsssssssssssssssssssssss Of Dr In Here To Be Honest Flow Was Good But Way Off Beat Thats A Slow Track You Were Way To Fast Lyrics Ok Not Good Way Wrong Again For That Beat Voice Is Good That They Got Wrong But You Need Better Deleviery And Wayyyyyyyy Better Lyrics Cuz That Was Wack Not Horrible I Heard Way Worse But Far From Hot

this was nice.......................

.......u have a new kind of voice and ur quality wasnt so good.............

.........but other than that everything was good jus keep workin on it...........

i kno the quality was terrible, but funny empire ur the only one to say sumthin' negative, rofl , welcome back, and the only part that was off beat if u actually listen to the beat would be the beginning of the chorus, but thou shalt not argue, so whatever rofl... :thumbup:

ye not bad for ya first at all good job

props ma lyrics were st8 delivery was pretty decent to for ya first audio voice sounds good to over-all nice ish FAM -1NE-

Had my doubts when you first started, your voice was real soft and high in the beginning. But as you continued, it got better in my eyes. I actually liked it, certainly for a first drop it was really nice. Quality wasn't all that good but that's no prob. I was feeling this one for real, way to go girl...

^word, much appreciated, normally I get female haterz as a female lyricist.. u and i d h prove that wrong, thanx Drama Q. pz...

Ye" I like this shit, but just for advice if you can flow more clear so people can understand u it would be a lot better. ALSO dON''T TRY TO SAY TO MUCH IN ONE BAR KEEP IT SIMPLE . SOMETIMES SAYING TO MUCH IN ONT ONE OR TWO BARS MAKES YOU FLOW SOUND RUSHED fEEL ME!!!!! YouR voice and sassyness plus, the beat is bangin. keep up the Good work ONE

jAY-GLASS #77