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sup yalll...yo trase thanks for the feedback? i think lol...i am gonna take that as u liked it, because there are no bad remarks...lol...still uppin

still uppin yall, dont let this sleep...i will return favor...~1~

Flow was pretty good...structure needs a slight adjustment, but since your flow is good it's fine...vocab could be upped a bit, but overall a nice piece...keep at it.

Hit up my Open mics in my sig...thanks.

thanks mayn...still uppin this open mic...i will return favors...~1~

still uppin for this feedback...will return favor...~1~

yea just work on ya structure an you should be good...leave feed on damn he's back lmao i brought that beastly open mic back...

thanks for tha feed fam...still uppin...~1~

upppppppppppppppin yalllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

Still Uppin For Some Feedback...i Will Have Audio Soon On This Shit...it Will Be Str8 Up Fire..~1~

that was pretty tight. tha verses were real thorough and alot better than some of the garbage peeps have in open mic these days. good structure and flow
holla at me

thanks for tha feedback TheWackestMC...still uppin for more...

I Liked it mayne **HONESTLY** Um If you Need some Advice id Say Try To Make It a lil More wordy ,..............I Know ppl say Not to B To wordy But ut was like you Cheated Yaself wit those short lines But Other Than That I Think you Should Record that Jus for a Demo or wateva..........And oh yeah Try To Work On Ya Vocabs .,But Those are basics and you prolly wont thiinkin bout it at the time were you? But other than that i seen no Mistakes

KEEP IT UP MYN!!!!

Hey Is Ya Battle against lil chubs closed or the link in ya sig dont work it jus comes up wit the Menu bar ?

chea...still uppin for some feedback in this bitch...i have audio for this, so if anyones wants to hear it pm me and i will hook you up with it...~1~