it's cool reloaded....just get da vote off aight...well uppin for votes

uppin for votes on da battle................mayne's

Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

DJ-KiD->
nice punches
had an okay multi in 1 line..
flow was aight on ur drop
vocab was okay
overall u get a 5/10...yo punches
could've been harder tho..

Lil-Youngstah
nice punches..they landed
ya structure was a little strecthed
ya vocab was pretty decent
w/p was aight..
6/10

Lil-Y took this one...punches were harder than DJ'z
and they landed...

uppin for votes on da battle still let's finish this

Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

Punches : Lil Y
Personals : Lil Y
Flow : both
Mettas : Lil Y
Complexity : Neither
Multies : Lil Y


VOTE<><>LIl Y ::: He Took It In About Every Catagory

aight 1 more vote let's end this battle...uppin for votes

uppin for votes.....one more to go on this battle.

Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

Lil-Youngstah Gets My Vote:


IP:


I Start spittin my versez.. like if i was a Psyber-net-ix,
U 19? still u haven't had any.. until u tried Cyber-net-Sex/
Dj Kid... i'll Scratch u Like a Mix record on a Turn-Table,
Sell u Like a Used Prostitute though Worser like a Burned-Lable/
Cut-yo-Wrist, Slip-yo-Throat... like if I was ready 2 battle in Combat,
Break-ya-spine, so like an Old man u sayin...*I just Threw-out my Back*/
Dawg u *wack*, Though u Defyin da Word,
U gettin lyrically stabbed by my *mic-sword*...

This was an ok spit liked the multis and flow. your last 2 lines messed up the structure tho so try to keep that in check aight

Think i'm gonna break this one down

Youngstah u will be a dead Youngstah after i finshed with u
bullet in da head too yeah u twat ur face looks like ur mams poo
4/10 "u twat your face looks like your moms poo"?

ill knock u down to ur bones crack shut up face or ill give u a smack
ur shit ur ryhmes r shit any1 would of tho u was a computer hack
5/10 weak


man u think ur it but ur just a ass dick ridin is ur best subject in life
dont worrri i got my knife slice u in bits n got r.i.p* like ur wife
6/10 your best line

You Need To look at some of the battles that people are winnin and try ta find out why aight elevate and keep battlin