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-   -   *Zeus* vs .::FaTaL LyRiCiSt::. (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161063)

Kronos 11-23-04 09:25 AM

Well Im In His Crew So I Can't Vote, But Zeus You Took This Hands Down. Word

Zeke 11-23-04 05:25 PM

Upping This Shit.........................................

Zeke 11-23-04 10:10 PM

Upping This Biatch......................................

Zeke 11-24-04 05:39 PM

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Zeke 11-24-04 11:38 PM

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streetryda 11-24-04 11:51 PM

Voted For: *Zeus*

v/*zeus*

breakdown
fatal-aight man you came real weak in this battle....you had no personals flowed well but no real punches were in there.....your structure was tha only thing u had over zeus....
you shoulda thought it out man.....no vocab and you just idk i wasnt feeling ya verse

zeus-aight u had horrble structure if you take out all the periods in it..dont try to compensate by doint that...unless its a pause then its aight some were pauses but some just didnt work as a pause....you had okay punches better than fatal...dont self glorify soo much tho....okay vocab put some multi's in there itll help ya flow some....

best lines
fatal-NIgga pleez wack emcees alwayz get beat.......
If i take ma shoes off den maybe u'll smell defeat(da feet).....

zeus-Ya Lyrics Aint Fatal....Run From Trouble Like A Baby Under The Table,
I'll Put Your Ass On That Flat Line....................See If You Stay Stable,
Your Unable To Defeat Me "Kid".......... Stay In Your "Baby Cradle"

v/*zeus*

return the favor links in the sig....honest explained
peace~1

FlowIntelligent. 11-25-04 03:56 AM

Voted For: *Zeus*

Fatal Lyricist that was the worse piece of shit i have ever seen.. especially the defeat line thats only been used 90748642865309867120 times.. pitiful...

zeus ya verse was decent i wasnt feeling all the periods tho either make your lines longer and leave out the periods or make it shorter and leave out the periods..:thumbup:

Zeke 11-25-04 06:34 AM

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GangsStarShit 11-25-04 06:36 AM

Voted For: *Zeus*

I think that Cincanatus got this battle because i feel that Cincanatus came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Cincanatus got it they were used effectifely and were on point FaTaL LyRiCiSt u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Cincanatus good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Cincanatus and flow and structure i'll give to Cincanatus.

V/Cincanatus There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly


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