RapVerse.com Community - PHAT-TRACKS VS. Lil D'

phat tracks

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this battles gonna be so easy, i'm gonna totally rip you apart/
fo sure i'm gonna win, cause this battled ended before it had time to start/
your sit'n here yell'n " i'm a real good mc"/
but peps will only see ya shit, in the history/
man you ani't gonna beat me, i got some much higher agretion/
ya say'n no, but i can tell by ya facecal expretion/
no need for you to say a coment/
already got ya rhymes barried in cument/
you may be sit'n there think "i'm the motomaster"/
but no matter what you do, i'm always gonna be faster/
cause ya just a dumb ass bastard/
and ya right un of heard/
i'm like a DR. say'n " bring in the next subject"/
but ya come in and ya nothing, just a peddy insect/
think ya come'n in without me have'n any detecktion/
but yo see that mirr, already saw ya reflection/
still no need for you to yell or pleed/
i'll just let you go, After I Make You Bleed/
cause nothing here happens automatically/
mite of thought ya did, but ya didn't beat me secessfully/

ok you used very nice vocab for a newb but i didn't see much multis...the bar about you said no but i can tell by ya facial expression was aight..and not tryin to be funny but learn how to spell...maybe people will get a clearer picture as well as vote for you more often...

LilDallas

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Yo that weak shit had me laughin/
But I'ma still take you down blastin hard rhymes, blowin ya mind/
you got a mirror to see my reflection/
but you need a dictionary to help spell yo agression/
i may be sittin here a newbie 0-3/
yet i'm still cocky cuz i see you can't even reach me/
you give whack emcees a good name/
like Christopher Reeves your raps are lame/(handicapped)
i've never had a victory come so easy/
but it's sad you gotta be the one to give me my first v, for sheezie/
don't believe me? when you finished spittin this bat was done/
and no i don't mean spittin lyrics, you steady on the run spittin my cum/
but like they say you get it from yo momma/
come on stupid that was NOT a toothpaste stain on her pajamas/
if you the doctor i'm hannibal/
rippin your whole verse to shreds like an animal/
when you said you was a bad rapper, that was an understatement/
i be on the top floor of flow while you pushin paper in the basement/
that dark night you in the basement without the light/
that was LIL D' Creepin in the HUMVEE with the AK's endin this fight.[/quote]

well here i seen a lil multis...not as much as i would have seen. the bar about steady on the run spittin my cum didn't really get me...most cum jokes are just played to the fullest. and in your closing bar..no one really cares about what care or what gun you had..this is the internet..

Overall: well i think phat tracks had a nice flow but didn't have no multis from what i understand. LilD came more directed and although i really didn't like some of his bars i gatta go with him

Vote: LilDallas