Voted For: Kwell

hang-man
nice punches...pretty decent
structure lacked...
flow was okay
didn't see no persona's...
overall u had an okay drop
3/10

Kwell
punches were hard & connected.
flow was good & same wit tha structure
vocab was nice...persona's were aight...
but overall u had a nice drop...
6/10

Overall
Kwell took this one..punches were
more creative & hard-hittin...flow
was aight..and tha structure was
decent...


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^*RTF* Please...

^favor returned............uppin for more votes...............i'll return the favor with an HONEST vote...............

Voted For: Kwell

This kid is beyond basic, but he still thinks he's dope
fuckin fruit, he's mad cuz he's unwanted, he cant-elope
^^LOL..GUD WORDPLAY 7/10

i dont play wit kids, this child cant even stay out past dark
grow the fuck up, n quit bein a fuckin newb widd'em hash
marks///
^^^DECENT PERSONAL 6/10

i'll leave u stuck widda huge fine, when i spray lines your way
my punch'll hit ya teeth, unleash, n let ya canines astray
^^^NOT FEELIN THAT...5/10
so u doubt me, u dont think i'll leave u slaughtered, clown?
heh, u git ya shit mixed up then, what u spit is watered down
^^^BETTER 6/10
dont knock my style, when yours is the one that needs fixin
i see u prewritin, so i know u gon lose based on pre diction
^^^NICE WORDPLAY AGAIN 6/10
i can come weak n still kill ya, these days things is changin
do i need a closer? maybe or maybe not, i'ma leave ya hangin...
^^^OK 6/10

OVERALL VERY NICE WORDPLAY, MAYBE UI CUD DO WIT SUM HARD HITTIN PERSONALS TO MAKE YA SHIT DOPE.
GUD JOB.

HANG MAN
u dont wanna test, fam...cuz even if the tech jams
i'll let my knives cut-in, like they wanted the next dance/
NO........3/10

if i clapped u, i'd earn a grip...but i dont need a burner, since
my apperance would make ya body shake, like recieve some turbulence/
HMMMM.NO....4/10

been in drag the longest, rockin dresses wit tha earrings
so ur the real king of queens, fuck the television series/
^^SLIGHTLY BETA ATTEMPT AT WORDPLAY 5/10

wanna meet superstars? i'll grab heaters n use the tool
so tell me if ya angels look as good as Cam Diaz n Lucy Liu/
^^^JUS AINT HITTIN 4/10

i carry the heat, when my missions to torch a brotha
u keep a strap-on, but urs come in different inches n assorted colors/
^^NICE BAR...LOL.7/10
and Ya dont get females either,with ya clowned features
and If u ever "tied the knot" u got instructions from ya "Scouts Leader"/ ONE-A-WHAT????
^^OK... 6/10

YA LAST TWO BARS WERE THE BEST..THE STRAP ON LINE CUDVE BIN DOPE WIT BETA SET-UP...AND IT DIN REALLY RHYME...REST OF YA VERSE WAS NO PUNCHES OR ANYTHIN REALLY...

SO OVERALL KWELL TOOK THIS....ALLROUND MORE CONSISTENT AND HARDER HITTIN.

CUD U PLZ RETURN THA FAV...................................

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Voted For: Kwell

i think u did better in strucute honestly i thought both of em were wack but u had better flow and his battle came off in places not really mugh flow to it and ryhmes were off but u know keep uppin n take this battle man

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