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Abraxas 11-21-04 06:34 PM

This was feedback posted for Chaos
 
both were pretty much not as goood but chaos gets the win easy with stronger pucnhes and better flow..... hangman had slighly better structre thouigh

hang-man 11-21-04 11:04 PM

stop sleepin on my verse hes was aight but the shit look pre-written and im not gonna say u did but it sure do look like it and even so my verse was more original but upp'in for more vote with the same good proper feed back

DrasticMeasureZ 11-22-04 12:02 AM

This was feedback posted for Chaos
 
Chaos Got Dis Nuff Said.......................................

-Eternal- 11-22-04 12:03 AM

This was feedback posted for Chaos
 
Killer verse chaos... even tho u hatin on me......

hang-man 11-22-04 12:06 AM

stop sleep'in ya and vote__________________________________________

Recluse 11-22-04 03:41 PM

^word...vote..and hang-man you wish it was pre-written..lol..uppin for votes

jr freeze 11-22-04 03:50 PM

Voted For: Chaos

v/chaos ..he came harder wit better punchs an multi's hang u didnt come as hard u had to many basic vocab an punchs but nice battle......
vote=chaos
return tha favor*

Recluse 11-22-04 07:14 PM

thanks...uppin for more votes....

Godz Angel 11-22-04 08:41 PM

Voted For: Chaos

Pretty good battle...... But Chaos got his... I liked your Punches.. they hit pretyt hard....... But your Structure was fooff.... Your Lines were sterched... And that made your flow hard to follow..... Hang man.,. Your punches didnt hit that hard..... But your structure was aight .... and your flow was decent..... But Chaos took this with his punches...

Peace~~

Rerturn tha fava in tha sig~

Kawn Flixx 11-22-04 09:36 PM

Voted For: Chaos

wow hang-man..

I don't know if you get this often but..you a garbage
lil nigga aint you? wow homie..this dude named martell
said he saw yo battles and you was tight..then I saw
this battle and went what the fuck alott times..
you know I aint hatin on you cuz I don't know you..
but the problems with your verse were..the rhyme scheme was VERY basic..structure was sorta fine ..but in a way wack..and for the most part..you used alot of gun shit..
don't do that here..

chaos did it too..but in a better way..
the way you did it..the threat WAS the punch..

Chaos I give your verse a 7/10 ..jus for wordplay..

now that's a honest vote ...

don't like it..complain about it lol

no hate..pc winner/Chaos


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