god fucking dammit fucking uppin on this fucking shit!!!!!!!

This was feedback posted for Poseidon
 

aight yall this was a lopsided battle...

both of yall could have done better but my homie poseidon took this one... X u my dawg too from when i was wit da rip and shit but ya need to work on ya flow, ya rhyme scheeme and all that shit, hit me up in pm and ill take a look at some of ya shit and help ya out X.... any way good verse Poseidon, flowed very well and punches and personals hit... you won this one easy... no hate X

Voted For: X-Spitty

Posidon
-Your full of more shit than a toilet Spitty
You Rep Da RIP dats a good choice for you
Cause you dont have any talent and its what youll be doin soon
-That Fucked You Up Because You Had Nothin To Rhyme With
Soon Doesnt Rhyme With You
.. But Your Verse Wass IIght NOt To Hot.Okay

X-Spitty-
You Had A better Flow Scheme Everything
Structure was a lil strectched at some poitns but everything flowed right togreahter nice verse.Im have to give this to you homie.-1

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Overall Vote- X-Spitty

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aight well thanks for the feed............
any more votes?

This was feedback posted for Poseidon
 

.....Yo Hands Down I Say Poseidon Had This Battle Lines Was Tight Some Stretch Lines Though But It Was Good With Vocab And Shit Good Shit

Voted For: Poseidon

god squad vs. RIP

punches- Poseidon had more and they hit harder
personals- Tie both had em equal
multis- X i spose cuz u had more of em
metas- Poseidon overall just better
structure- Tie, both were off
wordplay- Tie, both had one and really both kinda weak
flow- Poseidon's flowed better overall
humor- Tie

Poseidon aight drop. Work on better personals, word play, punches, multis, and structure. also be sure to have good openers and closures.

X rhymin wuz off and wuz hard to follow. also work on wp, punches, multis, and structure.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter.

v/Poseidon

pz

This was feedback posted for Poseidon
 

yo, poseidon threw it down man. it flowed nicely wit good word choice. i like da fact you threw in dat he was canadian man, way to use it to ur advantage. you did that shit hands down you got dat battle

Voted For: Poseidon

...Don...:
Verse Was Tight....Your Personals Was In There And Was Hitting Hard...Punchlines Was Cold As Fuck And Wordplay Was Cool....Vocabulary Was Decent But Structure Was Lop Sided

X Spitty:
Your Structure Was Fucked Vocabulary Was Basic Nu Punches Personals Wasnt Even Feeling Your Whole Verse Was Terrible You Need To Up Your Vocab Coz

Over All Weak Battle :ThumbDown:

v/Poseidon

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checking your shit out man..... ELEVATE!

good battle man....ill elevate for sure...........

lets get some more votes up in here...............

uppin for some more votes up in here..............

comeon come on....................................

god damn people dont sleep on this......lets get some more votes....

wow, cmon now people lets get some votes in here....