Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

Saaran:

Yo Elements-slow, I dont' do text, so mice styles scare this elephant yo
To Hell If I Show, so seriously bitch how you got an intelligent flow
^^^^umm decent opener
YOu beyond Kill-a-bale, periods in ya name cuz you only pernounce syl-a-bales
tempt me fool, mag is extinct, distuingushin my mags thats why i empty-fulls
^^^^mad multis here, good
Disable ya connection make you un-active bitch, now you under paralisis
you neva beat actual-kids, you just type and type devolopin callasis
^^^^aight...didn't jump out at me...
My 2 Cents, equal time kept, while mag. Nif. gets bent, like 2 pennies i lent
I bet,that my text equavalince is NiNE TECHS, so dis pussy's nine lives is spent
^^^^lol, nice
Every things this "pussy" spits is coughed up,to scared to baithe knowin he's washed up
its a toss up, while he tosses off, his nut hits every key, so ya rymes is lost HUH?
^^^^uhh..nice closer.

Mag:
Drop Ya Gossip Shit,I Plot The Rawest Scripts,And Ya Bars Suck
I'll Bitch Smack Saaran.. Leave Him Literally Star Struck
^^^^nice opener...basic though
I Scar Schmuks Till Their Hearts Bust, I Pity Coward Flocks
Saaran's Power Stopped.. His 'Times Up' Like City Tower Clocks
^^^^nice similes...
I'll Strangle Ya With Your Suspenders, Until You Get The Picture Urkel
Then 'I'll Get Dizzy' And You Wont Bitch Cuz Only The 'Winners Circle'
^^^good uses of metas
Fuck Ya Generic Punches..Dissin Is What You Should Choose To Do
Example...
If I Was Battling Someone Else, I Would Tell Them Theyre As Good As You
^^^best lines of the battle
Punches Just Aint Your Style, Youre Not Even Nice With It
To Tell The Truth, Im Only Doing This Bar To Reach The Line Limit...
^^^^ill closer here

I feel Mag's punches hit harder than saaran's. Mag had some nice metas, good use of vocab. Though I think Saaran had personals, though I wasn't feeling saaran's lines

So ooveral:
Mag: 7/10
Saaran: 6/10

none of yall had problems with flowing and structuring your verse. keep doing your thangs :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for Mag.Nif.I.Cent
 

checkin the polls....................

tight shit

pz

upping for some dam votes :thumbup: .....................

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Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

ok you win the word flow and style was tight... enough said