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GangsStarShit 11-26-04 06:45 AM

Voted For: Cosmos.

I think that the verb got this battle because i feel that the verb came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt the verb got it they were used effectifely and were on point CJ u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to the verb good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to the verb and flow and structure i'll give to the verb.

V/the verb There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly

For$akeN 11-26-04 12:53 PM

Voted For: Cosmos.

CounTREE Jay: 1st bar was okay....good attempt at a personal but it seemed like a filler. 2nd bar was played.......
3rd bar was a personal decently done. 4th bar was kind of self-glorification when you said "I'm makin' ya'll take a bath" which to me made the bar whack. 5th and final bar was self-glorification again...that just doesn't do it to win. overall: 6/10

the verb: alright...first bar was....a nice opener, decent wordplay on his name. 2nd bar was a cool bar aswell....had a connecting personal somewhat....3rd bar was played and not really feelin' it at all. 4th bar was decent. 5th bar was nice, had some good wordplay which was effective. 6th bar wasn't liking it at all. final bar was.........a good personal. overall: 7.5/10

vote: verb

Sik Wit It 11-26-04 01:09 PM

This was feedback posted for Cosmos.
 
wow..cj's shit was mad-stretched

checkin polls

cosmos = in my crew

so i can't vote

Pz.

Ambient 11-26-04 04:14 PM

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Critic 11-27-04 05:05 AM

This was feedback posted for Cosmos.
 
Sup nice battle by both,,... checking the polls..

1~

Ambient 11-27-04 02:54 PM

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¤ÐÅž¤ 11-27-04 10:07 PM

Voted For: Cosmos.

cos, had some ok lines i didnt feel anything hit extremely hard in this battle...some forced concepts in ya bars...
but for the most part ya verse was on point...
closer was decent.....
other verse...really dissapointed jay,i heard you were a vet.
your punches were weak, ya vocab was simple...
not enough thought put into your lines with the wordin n all, opener was self glorification...overall, up ya vocab ,punches n flow..n you'll be good..
cos,for an overall better verse..

Willa 11-28-04 03:23 AM

This was feedback posted for CounTREE Jay
 
good drop from both just upppin ur shit.................

Ambient 11-28-04 06:11 PM

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Acuity 11-28-04 07:19 PM

Voted For: Cosmos.

Vote: ambient

Opeing: amb
Ending: amb ---- nice
Lyrics: amb mo complex
Wordplay: amb ---wrecked him wit tha country disses
Punches: amb
Flow: countree
Multis: tie
Originality: amb
Crew dissin: countree

Overall ambient took dis, his drop was a different level to countreeJay's no beef. Return favour wit honest vote. (links in sig)


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