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Voted For: PheNom897

ehh u had this one but both were kinda weak id say i gave this one to u cuz u had stronger punchesand i thought ur flow was better by a little and ur vocab was a little better also i liked ur opener better ur closer was weak but both his closer and opener were so i gave this vote to u

vote on one of my open battles man thnx

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Voted For: PheNom897

yo u was hot your rhymes really make sense keep it up. HOLLA

Voted For: PheNom897

fuk no doubt phenom wins this shit no doubt....man u had` punchesIts tool time n this ain't home improvement...
n if I'm aimin wit a chrome fo ya dome you'll loose it...
If you really pimpin come on homes n prove it...
You'll really be a "ghostwriter" when this glock turn ya ass translucent...
Face it dog U got ate in the first four, you'll digest in tenth...


^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lol hahahah gud shit had wack flow but fuk it and had sum nasty structure.....pimpjuice wat kan i say,......u had sum illl punches but he ate u................... keep elevatin........dawg///////////

holla ak in my battle agaisnt jmsbnd below wit honest votez aiight////////

Voted For: Pimpjuice

pimp juice takes this...close but weak battle.i wasnt feelin phenoms verse at all,weak punches and personals and he had a bad flow and structure.pimp juice had a bad flow and structure as well but he had like 2 punches that i was feelin.the 2nd and the third bar. keep elevaten to the both of u.
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Voted For: Pimpjuice

Personals--Pimpjuice
Punches--Pimp juice
Multi's-- Phenom
Meta's---Pimpjuice
Vocab-- Phenom
Structure--Pimpjuice

So theres my vote With Break downs LOL you both did great i wish you both luck in the future
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Please return the favor......I prefer My battle Against Yung~Deedz ( Please vote in that one first ) Bcuz I Need that easy ass Win ***But Vote honestly***
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Voted For: Pimpjuice

pimpjuice took this just leave the homo stuff out your verse i hate seein that but thats just my opinion better metas i liked
"i "wipe" my "ass" wit toilet paper dats harder dan you dude"


phenom your verse was weak because you said you were gona shoot him hello this is the internet you had one good line
"ya rap career is almost dried up put ya ryhmes on tha hanger..."
not enouh to win though

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Voted For: Pimpjuice

i was feelin phenoms drop, but i didnt give him tha vote because his punches seemed incomplete. like, some places seemed like they needed punches, and he just didnt deliver them there, and some places were soft. but overall, tha verse was nice. i seen a lot of creativtie, but i just couldnt give u tha win...
pimpjuice-yo dumb name has nuthin to do wit yo talent. NO hate...lol...but i was feelin ur verse. i think u came more consistent, and ur punches were a lil bit harder, and u came off wit wordplay. thats why i gave u tha vote. this was a good verse, but i feel ur structure was a bit off. just work on that and keep elevating, and shits coo...
overall-this was a close one. i had to point out a coupld things. take everything into consideration, and elevate on ur next battle.

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