thanx for the feedback

Dope shit..

sinners a fucking idiot..

Some kids claim they rule RV and got potential to run this shop,
But sustaining merkings on a daily basis proves theses kids ain't hot,
-speakin the truth son.........nice

This is jus a day in the life of the wack member named Sinner,
Changed his name to Affect but's had no effect on this whinger,
- ha nice diss good punch

Up the middle finger and he mistakes it as a sign for him to come here,
For advice on assonance multies rhymes flow and how to sound clear,
- aiiiiight iam feeling that punch nice

Seriously u thought u'd make an impact by switching ya game to audio?,
U like an ugly prostitute when u speak damn thats jus a horrid flow,
-muwhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, (wipes the devil laughing tears)

You speak tough between screens but when called out he creams,
His vocals worse than screams every1 tells ya but u won't go it seems,
- iam feeling this punch nice

Now he's blabbin about this girl Kerry Johnson but i think she imaginary,
Coz he's talkin in riddles...this loser wants the son of John Kerry,
-muwhaha nice punch good wordplay......personals looking good

Now he thinks he's a bad boy coz he registered on this site,
But they as good at spottin him out like us when we flashed the light,
- nice wordplay good punch

Ya got too much beef and those words won't hold out for long,
Ya losin this battle trust me what don't kill ya don't make ya strong,
- true thats the truth he speaking yo...........werd

U've been fucked up more here than ho's on a busy night,
U can keep talkin but u'll never man up to accept a fight,
-muwhahahahahhahaa nice wordplay good punch

U full of fright...he's been bullied since 5 and still gettin hurt to this day,
He tried to make himself feel better...by aiming all his words at this gay,
- mwuahahahahah nice punch good personal

And he still got murdered...honestly how far are you prepared to go,
Ya old nemesis M-dog challenged you live & again he chose to no-show,
-whoa u no-showed..........harsh good punch nice personal

You got no respect nobody is interested in the shit you do,
Want some proof?...here this is how much people hate you,
-werd good personal and a punch


aiiiiight this an good diss........nice personals and...................wordplays were dope................da punches were hard hittin i give dis an 9/10 work on them vocab'z.........but either way dis an good diss to sinner

o and put an feedback in my open mic

"in the club"

/\ done...uppin

yo i know affect lookin at this..............AFFECT I KNOW U SEE THIS I CAN SEE U~!

Man u wanna drop feedback u more than welcome...shit if only this was O/M of the month...but being this is the millionth diss to his ass...i'm sure this in open mic standards would be a plyed topic...but i'm the type to freshen gay punches so...vote for me

that was pretty sick man good vocabs and flow i felt the topic come hit me up with feed on my drop its only my second one so.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162068

thats some sick shyt man dope flow nice topics damn thnx for postin on my last drop man keep it real... hook me up on this one much appreciated http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162066

yo gst that shit is hot how u jus called this nigga out and made him look like a bitch by promotin this niggas losses..that shits tight..1

nice drop man felt the flow rhyme scheme and topic sick overall im new to this shyt hit me up and let me know whats good http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162167

/\ why did you drop feedback twice???...anyway uppin this thread returning favours again...need a decent post count

nice diss
nice flow

pretty much all aspects on point

propz.

...Nuff Said...

Nice...uppin this yet again...seeing as he responded but i refer to this diss as my response as i'm not going to waste words on this lil kiddo /\.