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Adam 11-26-04 09:17 PM

This was feedback posted for Empire
 
i'd have to say empire took this one...just feedback

~Luciano~ 11-27-04 01:20 AM

Voted For: Empire


see without the line limit...the faggot could rhyme a pile...
of course nothing has more sheets...than Empire's Police File
4/10
knew you'd be back one day...I just didn't expected this
name's EP...cause he's got a whole record of wackness
2/10
this little kid qualify as a liar...he qualify also as a biter
though every single Jack has his Jill...no talent fits Empire
4/10
you're quite a stranger to me.....but it has all been said
he's chopping through our necks...
...hoping everyone will quit while they're "a head"!!!!!!!!!!
3/10

punches were kinda lame
wordplay was good
similies werent there
and personals werent there

I thought whores swallowed what you setting a trend?
You verse will get layed out played out quicker then J-Los men
6/10
Bars couldnt shock me if they was wrote in electrical currents
Elevation continue to drop lower then old folks car insurance
5/10
The whole problems root is accept the truth you basically wack
And from a place ninety percent of R.V cant point out on a map
3/10
(Where the fuck is New Zealand anyways?)
If skills is 'Econimics' yous a third world country close to collapsing
I school lames in text this a class you got no chance of passing
5/10

nice punches
good metas
nice simlies
ya didnt really have any personals
ya structure was nice simple and short
one of the best drops ive seen from u

Sik Wit It 11-27-04 01:56 AM

Voted For: Empire

see without the line limit...the faggot could rhyme a pile...
of course nothing has more sheets...than Empire's Police File
3/10
knew you'd be back one day...I just didn't expected this
name's EP...cause he's got a whole record of wackness
5/10
this little kid qualify as a liar...he qualify also as a biter
though every single Jack has his Jill...no talent fits Empire
5/10
you're quite a stranger to me.....but it has all been said
he's chopping through our necks...
...hoping everyone will quit while they're "a head"!!!!!!!!!!
4/10


You spit??!!
I thought whores swallowed what you setting a trend?
You verse will get layed out played out quicker then J-Los men
5/10
Bars couldnt shock me if they was wrote in electrical currents
Elevation continue to drop lower then old folks car insurance
4.5/10
The whole problems root is accept the truth you basically wack
And from a place ninety percent of R.V cant point out on a map
6/10
If skills is 'Econimics' yous a third world country close to collapsing
I school lames in text this a class you got no chance of passing
5/10

Overall Empire took this one tho…
punches were harder…nice persona’s…
structure was nice…& tha flow was good


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