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Voted For: Mike Hawk

chaos wtf was that structure was fucked You Think Your So Dope-But Ya Shits Really Wack!!.....<<that was gay anyways you didnt have no real amusing or hard hitin punches wasnt feelin ya verse


hawk ima guess you losen this battle but i figured i'd drop a honest vote you had betta punches structure was waaay better but punches an personals win battles an your punchlines were better than his so my vote goes to you vote-hawk..

Voted For: Chaos

ok mike hawk opener ok secone whos alpo?the diss line was corny the audio record good personal ender personal also good ok vocab and flow nice structure a 5/10
chaos opener blah no the spelling personal good good write back punch the fiya line was blah and the cancer omg sic lines are played as fuck you know this the e style diss was funny the ender was funny as fuck hard ass fucking diss there lmao structure and flow ok vocab also 6/10
basically this was a weak battle but chaos had a longer verse and therefore better punches throughout both dropped weak here but chaos had better punches and the was really the only deciding factor

This was feedback posted for Mike Hawk
 

lolololololololol

im bout 2 merk the shit outta u

^ Wow.

and Alpo is a drug dealer from the 80's...go watch paid in full.

Voted For: Mike Hawk

Mike wins this easilly, basically he was better, he won this battle I honestly think he won this battle, came harder with a better verse... chaos, your personels hit but not hard, mike the 'bright' line was dope, course most people won't get it... but ya, you had some dope lines and personels, trigga, you used some pre school rhyming shit here, shabba wins this

...........................I run through hood.

Voted For: Mike Hawk

Chaos
I'll Rip YA Head Off-and Shove It Up Ya Ass Untill It Reaches Ya Chest!!!.....
Then Break All Ya Ribs Untill The Doctor Says Its-Too-Complex-Too-Fix!!.....
nope..
Your Pathetic-No One Wants You At This Site!!.....
Thats Pretty Bad-When You got Lady Fiya-Telling Ya.... You-Need-To-Take-A-Hike!!.....
blah!!..
You Think Your So Dope-But Ya Shits Really Wack!!.....
The Only Time You'll Win-A-Match..Is If The Person Doesn't WRITE BACK!!
this was wack..
I'll Murder You- In 1000 Different ways!!.....
And Make Your Face Like Your Spelling-Not Finished All The Way!!
blah!..u just changed one letter.
Fuck A Medic-Aid-Like Speading-Cancer-Plague!!.....
You Wouldn't Win-Even If You Were Made Too-In A Role-Playing
nah.
E-Style?-I Don't Even Want To Get On That Subject
A Whole Bunch Of Rejects-Trying To Make It Public
blah..
Really You Just A Bitch-And I don't Got Time To Play With Little Kids!!!.....
But Why Is Ya Crew-Made For The Herbs That Got More Losses-Than-Winz!!
wack verse...
ya structure was stretched to fuck...wats with all the !!! and -. ya verse really doesnt need it. Punches were weak and i really couldn't see any personals apart from the lady fiya and the e-style one. both were wack.

Mike Hawk
This fag is stupid...beatin Mike...rigggghhht...
Just cause he writes in orange don't mean he's bright
1st line was kinda sell glorified...lol... but nice personal.
Think his verses look good, can you plz tell us
Why ya bars stretched to the point it make Alpo jealous
lol
Thinkin cuz u runnin with AI makes you strong...well...
How come when I dropped a diss on em, a week later they fell
lol...nice personal...i think that was the collab wit Looch?
Kids is ass, hatin on me aint gon make u better,
but I can understand why u do...look at ur audio record
not bad...decent punch.
TRIGGA to Chaos, well none of us really remembered you
But I stay on ya mind...jus go look at his interviews....
nice 1st line...but the second could of worked better with a link

okay...structure was nice and neat...effective punches. personals were funny and worked well. ya verse wasn't great but anything was better than chaos'. serious chaos that was terrible.

v/ Mike Hawk

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Voted For: Chaos

wow this battle was horrible. yall really need to try n make ur verse flow a little better so they are easier to read, n work on rhyming too. I give this battle to chaos becuz he had a lot of personals in there, however forced, but they got the job done...sort off. improve on creativity thats always a plus
holla at ya boy please
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Don't vote on my battles anymore String.
Just been hating the last 3.

UHHHHHHGGGG....................................... .....This battle shouldn't be close at all.

Voted For: Chaos

yo this was close battle. But I think Chaos took this.

Mike, you had some funny lines, but some of yo lines I really didn't think worked, or were filler. They were aiight. YO flow went off near middle to me. I unno. but overall it was aiight.

Chaos, you verse was nice. Flow kept on throughout the verse. Funny closer, I liked that. You had good personals, some were filler or wack. But overall nice. I think you edged this out wit a fe stronger personals. close battle tho.