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SCIP 11-25-04 11:04 PM

yo c can u vote my shit no man return tha favor thanx ~1~

.:Jack Rackam:. 11-25-04 11:41 PM

This was feedback posted for RED BEAM
 
pretty even but im not gettin why you both dont have 2 verses,...i mean a tag battle has 4 people not 3..
this should be closed n done right, then ill drop a vote..pc

YOUNG_CITY 11-26-04 01:00 AM

Voted For: RED BEAM

this was pretty weak, and if its a tag battle, i dont understand why theres only 3 verse, but whatever...maybe its 2 against 1..lol...but i voted for faceless and redbeam because their verses went well together to me, and they made more since. chaos/troop, whoever, u had a ok verse, but it was super stretched, i think u should work on that, tha lines i mean were stretched out too much, and i dont think ur punches landed that hard. i think faceless had a clean drop, wit some nice punches in there, and some consistency wit his verse...and alot of mettas...red. u basically took tha punches category, but then near tha end u fell off, but its coo, cause u had a partner. i think if faceless wasnt here, u wouldve lost. that r.l stine line was clean...(im stealing it)...lol j/p. but good shit to me
chaos or troop or whoever u are, nice dorp like i said, i esp. liked that last line, about tha essays...lol...pretty creative, but u stretched that punch out too far, but its whatever...good shit i guess...yall all got skillz by tha way, keep at what yall do...and red, i happen to have voted on a couple of ur battles, and ur style never switch up...work on that kid...

*FaceLess* 11-26-04 01:13 AM

Thanks For The Vote Kidd Upping.........................

Recluse 11-26-04 11:57 AM

^you know that was a d/r vote and i should have put the post count to 600 on this shit.....uppin for more honst votes........

Recluse 11-26-04 05:57 PM

uppin for more votes in this bitch.........

YOUNG_CITY 11-26-04 09:28 PM

dont PM me no more chaos...ur a faggot!!! i just read every post in this thread, and you and Red were the only ones bitchin about votes against yall...stop bitchin, you wont get every vote...and if u was to up tha crap to 600, then tha battle would be 0-0, because all of ur voters didnt have 600 post...alot like me...twirple ass nigga...so stop bitchin...and DM...u did post befor eme in here, but urs was honest, so it dont matter...

Recluse 11-28-04 07:29 PM

uppin for more votes......

Gotti Nuffguns 11-28-04 07:37 PM

Voted For: Chaos

Vote -- Chaos

His punches all hit u nigg' n they knockd u out
His flow was iigh .. nuff said
His personals was the best .. LOL about his crew
His structure was pretty nice ..
ENJOYMENT !!

Overall - 9/10


SMH - Redbeam

Punches were okay but didn't hit the spot
Flow was choppy n was kinda stretched
Personals was kinda fuckd up ..
Structure is the same as chaos .. but to many '...'

Overall - 4/10

Nuff said peace

Infinite Skills 11-28-04 08:06 PM

Voted For: Chaos

vote : chaos

chaos had better punches and personals.. i like using the body parts in punches but don't play em out...

best line :

Kid Ill Break Ya Down And Have Ya Slayed-In-Sections
Cuz Ya Couldn't Be Spitting Fire' If LadyFiya-Had-Erections!!!.....

and for both of you.. faceless that structure was wack and punches didnt hit and u lacked multis and personals..

best line:

its bad news if ya tempt me, disconnect ya spine
i'll give u niggas "goosebumps" like I'm "R.L. STINE"*


honest vote.. no beef 1

M-Eazy 11-29-04 02:35 PM

wtf...all these votes are 50 post or less...i think u got d/r's faggot...this shoudlnt even be open still cause troop aint dropped bitch, and i didnt say nuthin about city's vote being d'r, let him vote who he wants fag!!! thas real...we merked him face, his shit was hella stretched

Recluse 11-29-04 03:48 PM

^lol..kid..blow ME...your shit..i didn't even try bitch..ask anyone if i tryed on this battle....uppin this shit to be closed on this fagget....

~Luciano~ 11-29-04 03:54 PM

Voted For: Chaos

Punches goes 2 chaos
wordplay goes 2 chaos
similies goes 2 chaos
personals is a tie
red beam is the only one out of ya comp that spitted somewhat talently
u can call call it a Dr all u want..but look at my votein history.,.i never vote on chaos drops....but this was an honest vote
chaos had all the main points on q....except ya structure was fucked

Blah.//


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