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checking polls............................................. ....

upping for votes ...... drop a link ill return the favor

Voted For: Empire

C.A.L.I.:
Def. Came Hard,His Flow Came Good..You Could Feel It Flow Out..Strcture Was Very Decent..Vocabulary Was Neat Cut Clean..Punches Was On Target It Came Hard..Personals It Was Tight I Like The White Flag Shit DOPE....WordPlay Came Good And Decent......9.5/10

Flow:
Structure Very Decent Your Vocabulary Held You Back On THis One How You Kept Saying I In The First Couple Lines..Wasnt Feeling That..I Know You Could COme Better Then That Kid...Punches Was There All Hitting Hard...Personals Was Also Decent I Know You Could Of Done Better Though Over All I'll Give You A 9/10

Close Battle This Was Decent

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Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit....flow omg damn
nice battle here....but flow wins
and don't follow me in threads emp saying its a hate vote..
but shit flow I. was tight...
that outside the net line was gold fam..
I don't really like doin line by line votes
but the only lien from flow i didn't like
was the dustin curtains line..favorite line
from empire was the hard dike line
worst was the opener...but overall i gotta say
flow wins because he had doper everything
despite empire's superior structure...

vote/flow

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feedback this is....

a nice battle....not bad


should be close

but i wont say who i think won;)

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I know this beef means alot to empire, since you only fight with text
to you its war.. but see real people have lives outside the net
so forget Empire i would melt this queer.....he's fucking worthless
stick to facts, shouldnt this cat, be washing clothes and dusting curtains
Basically Im like the repo man.... youre whole family will fear me kid
You used to want my 2 cents on your verses, now you want 2 cents period


vs

nothing of Empires...

word... and if I had 800 posts this would've been a vote... oh well...

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I just wanna check the polls yo..

Holla at cha boobies.

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why is my name always in peoples verse LMFAOOOOOOO

thats why rb=fags straigfht homo and your audios suck and your still ducking me fag :nono:

Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

flow-flow,wat can i say about this it was more on point...

punches-this is where flow won...both handed their punches no doubt about this but flow had funny punches and i thought they were really good......empires shit was tight too but they were mainly personals...personals are good but i prefer witty punches in text battles

personals-empire, his whole verse was basically personals and he held it down here good

so flow got this for harder and witty punches and flow...no hate

good luck
peace

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bring a honest vote here if u got a chance.....empire dont bring no hate votes please...cuz i didnt vote for u here

thanks
peace

Voted For: Empire

Flows Verse

I dont even like you dawg, your wack.... so fuck A.I i'll fight you all
I like to brawl.. but how you gonna whoop my ass lookin like a white ru-paul
^ Ru-Paul = Played i think u've used before you know

I know this beef means alot to empire, since you only fight with text
to you its war.. but see real people have lives outside the net
^ lol @ this soooo true

so forget Empire i would melt this queer.....he's fucking worthless
stick to facts, shouldnt this cat, be washing clothes and dusting curtains
^ this had me laughin dope punch

Basically Im like the repo man.... youre whole family will fear me kid
You used to want my 2 cents on your verses, now you want 2 cents period
^ punch good but some self-glory blah

Im the nicest bastard... to inspire slackers, biters, jackers
Because i lock the topspot even if you write it backwards
^ Closer coulda been better nice wordplay but no diss

C.A.L.I's verse

Ya ficticious gimmics not hitting no chance yall rivet my verse
State loosely yous a Nas groupie from 'THA ROC'?man this is a first
^ good opener good personal and punch

Ya 'Flow' was 'Intelligent' now its bullshit irrelevant nonsense
Type fag like soldiers with white flags you scared to bomb vets
^ good punch nice flip off his name

Still slipping ya punches is missing like drunks in bar fights
Damn rookie you a gansta pussy = mag is a hard dike
^ aight punch

Got shooters behind ya computer?ya fucking interviews is hilliarious
Still riding on 'G's 'Balls'.........and i aint talking bout for$akens alias
^ lol good personal/punch

'Mind over body' what you mediatating?praying for saviours?
Damn lier now call in your dick riders tell um turn in they favors
^ good closer aight punch

Overall
As much as i don't want to say this for fear people will call me an Empire groupie...he did get this in my opinion...Flow your verse was aight but near the end it slipped and you finished it off with self-glory...you need to re-work how you go about laying out punches because it seems like your flow and structure is aight however your punches and personals seem to lack. Empire won this through sheer whoring to be honest not the best but the personals he used did good for his verse whereas you coulda used some and probably won this.

V/C.A.L.I There's my sig be sure to RTF :thumbup:

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Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

Dammmnnnnn tight battllee

Readin dis and actually goin "ooohhh" to sum linez lol

OPening: EMp killed it
Ending: Flow dat shit was hot........kinda wonderin how u thought of dat but sikness
Lyrics: tied
Vocab: Empire
Structure:tied
Flow: Flow
Multis: neither
Personals: Empire
Punches: Flow - jus cos they were funnier, better and mo original

Overall Flow- 8.5/10
Empire - 8/10

Peace

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Dopeeeness fam come well dark in this battle, checking
the polls...