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Voted For: TRUTH

try to keep up youll only end up breakin a nail/
if you were "blind" you couldnt "feel me" if i "wrote this in brail"/
Played but still okay
your unable to defeat me how could you even consider it?/
and why the hell are you "writin your verses"... when you know you "illiterate"/
not really a punch
put ya "toys" away once you realize you "playin with death"/
you tried to forfiet a "TEXT BATTLE"... by "sayin you DEF"/
ehh no dont
your raps is way "too old" thats why they "wrinkled" like jeans/
you couldnt "see me" if there was a "picture of my face" on yo screen/
played concept
after reading the shit i wrote i bet your eyelids throb/
and you left "speechless"... similar to "Silent Bob"/.....
this was an okay punch




You claim 2 be the truth, dat has 2 be blasphomey
Cos your less believable than bill clinton's testimony//
No beucaes this is played... and you are forcing the vocabulary
U luvin reppin da Bay area, 4 all i care u cud be from bavaria
Cos ur damaging cali's rep, ur rhymes got niggaz in hysteria//
not really a punch just kinda filler line
HAHA, dat wack rhyme shit, aint even a "simple rap diss"
so no1 else sees it, hide that shit in tha deepest abyss//
umm i dont know what you was gettin at here so i would say filler again
15years old, and u challengin me to a battle, u sane TRUTH?
Im a grown ass man, u still waitin 4 da fairies 2 come n take ur milk tooth//
tryed at the punch but not really gettin anywhere
Dis win was inevitable, y did i waste ma time on a MC who aint credible
Thinkin u cud eat dis MC was crazy, cos da Elusiv G is inedible//
self glorifacation isnt a way to go


v/ truth for actually having some okay bars

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Voted For: TRUTH

truth merked G he had rhyming personallys off the fuckin map
he had a good flow stryctre was tight
best line-your unable to defeat me how could you even consider it?/
and why the hell are you "writin your verses"... when you know you "illiterate"/

This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
 

nice drop fam.......
too bad u aint wit EF no mo
but still a nice drop.....

Voted For: TRUTH

yo im goin to have to give dis one to TRUTH and heres y

TRUTH's verse
try to keep up youll only end up breakin a nail/
if you were "blind" you couldnt "feel me" if i "wrote this in brail"/
.....iight line but it didnt hit very hard.....
your unable to defeat me how could you even consider it?/
and why the hell are you "writin your verses"... when you know you "illiterate"/
.....lol i liked dat one dat one hit a lil harder than da first line....
put ya "toys" away once you realize you "playin with death"/
you tried to forfiet a "TEXT BATTLE"... by "sayin you DEF"/
......haha dat line was all around nice.......
your raps is way "too old" thats why they "wrinkled" like jeans/
you couldnt "see me" if there was a "picture of my face" on yo screen/
......dat line was pretty good its hit kinda hard....
after reading the shit i wrote i bet your eyelids throb/
and you left "speechless"... similar to "Silent Bob"/.....
.....haha i like dat line dawg good shit.....





Elusiv G's verse
You claim 2 be the truth, dat has 2 be blasphomey
Cos your less believable than bill clinton's testimony//
.....lol i liked dat line it hit harder than TRUTH's open.....
U luvin reppin da Bay area, 4 all i care u cud be from bavaria
Cos ur damaging cali's rep, ur rhymes got niggaz in hysteria//
......dat was an iight line didnt hit as hard as da other one.....
HAHA, dat wack rhyme shit, aint even a "simple rap diss"
so no1 else sees it, hide that shit in tha deepest abyss//
......dat line wasnt very good to original.....
15years old, and u challengin me to a battle, u sane TRUTH?
Im a grown ass man, u still waitin 4 da fairies 2 come n take ur milk tooth//
.......dat line didnt hit hard at all......
Dis win was inevitable, y did i waste ma time on a MC who aint credible
Thinkin u cud eat dis MC was crazy, cos da Elusiv G is inedible//
......dat line sucked no hate tho.....