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feelin dis - i reckon wud make a gd trak if u added anuva verse and a chorus - and u cud get like a femcee 2 spit on it wud b dope - was feelin vocab was on high level, structure worked and u stayed on theme wud have been betta a bit longer and mo imagery - tight drop - keep em comin - overall 8.5/10 - peace 1

ima try that...ill get at you as soon as its done..pz

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7.9/10 really good famo..though seemed sorta plain
and the love topic's been done on T.V...but I like urs better then
theres lol..so I give you thumbs up for it...I liked ur flow
except for one line of cource..but its good..I'ma look at your
shit more often..so I won't miss you elevating...

aiight thnx for the feedback ill be sure to do that....

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