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This was feedback posted for Class.Sic
 

Daamme fam come sicck in this battle,.... IE come nice
aswell....

Stay up both

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Voted For: Class.Sic

Class.Sic – iight spit man, your flow was off.. but you had some good punches in there and some wordplay.

Best Line - ill show you love while bringing death.…displayed ya mommas hearse--/
thought you were on the road to victory...…except your stuck in reverse--/

Worst Line - Drive a suburban up your ass………….literally driving 4x4 through intense shit--/
kid's got dickriders of the mass....couldnt fix ya structure w/ a craftsman tool kit--/

intensify effect – not that bad, but your flow was off also.. good punches, but didn’t see any good wordplay.

Best Line - u need a writting lesson, cuz ya punches been used like Rentals....
u spit like ya tooth-ach, cuz ya skills a FRONT all i had to do was ASK-YA-DENTAL

Worst Line - i wish i could go back when u was born, wait till u pop out N stab u on the head with a horn from a unicorn...
i could of sworn u was WARN, fucking with I.E is like throuing ya-self NAKED INTO A BUSH OF TOURN...*

OVERALL – not that good off a battle here, but I got to vote for someone, so. My vote goes to: Class.Sic. He had some alright wordplay in there which won him this battle. IE your shit was iight.. but he beat you on wordplay and that’s about it. No hate.

Vote - Class.Sic

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^^^ ahhhh whatever mang.....................................

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Voted For: Class.Sic

wowo aii this Is how The King Breaks it down

Punchez
Personals
meta's
Multi's
Structure >>> All go To Class.Sic

Vocab .....Goes to IE

but My final vote is Class.sic

So there You Have it folks i hope i helped in a good way ...........now RTF in my Battle against Hang-man Please
Thank you you are so kind

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Voted For: intensify effect

holy shit....................................... what can i say.....................class.sick smash-hit like "DALE EARNHARDT CAR"... off "THE WALL".... * HA*
this Rap-GAME is mine, cuz u dont think about the HOOP but still "PLEASE w/ da BALLS"... *get it* 1
Stop Da Talk, As I "Shock-This-Cock" while He Sellin "His-Crack" Like His-Ass-Descending...
No One Likes Tha Shit You Right(Write), Like Niggaz "Left-A-Story" wit A Bad-Ending....
^^^^^^^^^^^^ the above shit wuz nasty..... both u homies came hard here,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,. i.e. won this cuzza harder punches 4 sure and had the dopest structure,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, no beef or sukin u pbut truth,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ma n klazzik ur lines were ill wtf ur problem wif violent type.................. keep it klean,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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