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..::Climax::.. 12-05-04 05:53 PM

lol......... oi i dropped weak as here..... i peeped your old battles.... even if you tried i still would have won uppin for some votes!

Insight. 12-05-04 07:20 PM

Voted For: ..::Climax::..

alias vs. alias

punches- Climax harder hittin and more of em
personals- neither
multis- neither
metas- Climax cuz u had em
word play- Climax u had it
humor- Climax
flow- Climax lot smoother
structure- Climax easier to read

aight Climax ok drop. try some better personals, and multis.

Bouncer work on everythin, cuz im not gonna bother typin it out.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/..::Climax::..

px

..::Climax::.. 12-06-04 12:22 AM

uppin for some votes!

..::Climax::.. 12-06-04 03:47 AM

uppin for some votes!.............

Cos Mic 12-06-04 10:16 AM

hey if u seen the real side of me be4 i got ip banned u would have been day like that but i got ip anned then got a new ip and im crap even since not won 1 sice

intensify effect 12-06-04 02:24 PM

Voted For: ..::Climax::..

climax verse was preety good a couple of punches above decent flow and creativeness was decent all around not a bad verse and actully preety good for a noob....

g bouncer u'r verse was WAY to basic, no effort in it no punches no good diss flow was simple and easy all around WAY TO BASIC AND SIMPLE elevate dogs...

vote: climaxeasy......

Cos Mic 12-06-04 04:10 PM

i no i gave him da win....................that y the call out was called who wanna merk me

PayDay 12-06-04 04:27 PM

Voted For: ..::Climax::..

G-Ride Bouncer

climaz ill knock ya head of with a axe
shit ill burn ur rhymes they mad of wax
(WEAK OPENER...SO SIMPLE..5/10)

shits so weak water cud break um
fake um time to break shake um
(URE JUST RHYMIN...NO PUNCHES OR MULTIES...4/10)

ill wont stop until u black n blue
i murked this newb hes weak i dont give a poo
(WEAK WEAK CLOSER...NOT EVEN FUNNY...4/10)

THIS WAS A WEAK VERSE MAN...NO HATE...BUT ALL YOU DID WAS FLOW...YOU HAD NO PUNCHES, META, MULTIES, DISSES...NOTHING...ELEVATE MAN...ELEVEATE


CLIMAX

He's a sure success....... at failure, and he aint never gonna be ill
I here coments that he flows well....only cuase his career aims down hill
(DECENT OPENER...FLOW OKAY...NO REAL GOOD PUNCH...6/10)

This dick ride bouncer.... its on his was to the hall of shame
mate you couldnt elevate, If you were on an escalater playing you game
(DECENT FLOW, OKAY DISS...USE BETTER WORDPLAY...6/10)

He cant be straight spiting...... cause he's sucked cocks in many caces
only ill shit that cums from his mouth is the sperm traces...
(OKAY CLOSER...YOUR BEST BAR...KIND OF PLAYED AND STRUCTURE IS OFF...7/10)

YO...YOUR VERSE WASNT BAD, BUT IT WASNT GREAT...IT IS AN AVERAGE BATTLE VERSE...YOU NEED TO BE MORE CREATIVE WITH YOUR WORDS AND STR8 UP DISS THAT DUDE...YOUR FLOW WAS AIGHT...STRUCUTRE WAS KINDA OFF....ELEVATE SOME, AND ULE B GOOD


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