Ok I See Too Many Dr's Hurr Fam So I'll Be Pm'ing Strobe About This Peace...people Explain Your Votes...stop Dr'ing

Peace

U.........P........P......P........i......N.......

Voted For: JaeBurnz354

V/JaeBurnz....he had better punchs an multi's an structure...Rap.. ....ur verse had sum punchs but u didnt come consistent wit the diss's.....
punchs=Jb
multis=Tie
vocab=jb
structure=jb
overall=jb
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

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Voted For: JaeBurnz354

JaeBurnz definately won this one with better punches and wordplay... You could work on ur structure, but every thing else was near perfect...
Fave/Best Line:There that should give you more of a punchline...
I'ma leave u liek six packs, when it's crunchtime/(Hurting)

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Voted For: JaeBurnz354

that was just plain better had better every thing man rv you need to elevate and then you go and send one of your lines as a pm wats up with that

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I didn't send it, HE sent it to ME, you Fucking Moron.

I swear you're the only person who couldn't understand that.

DaMn people have voted but not in the polls waddup??

Voted For: RapVerse

JaeBurnz354
decent punches, nice structure
vocab was good, flow was aight
didn't see no wp from you, overall
ur drop wasn't good..yo punches didnt
make no sense..

RAPVERSE
decent drop, punches were hard-hittin
structure was blah, flow was aight..and
ur vocab was aight..decent wp...overall
decent drop..could've came harder tho
but u took this win..

forgot return the favor linkz in sigg

Is this a joke? The battle has been open for 36 days and has only recieved 2 decent votes.

Voted For: JaeBurnz354

i gotta give this one to jae burnz because his punches were just better but rapverse almost took this one. Had rapverse been able to come up with a better opener for that "watch as jae burns" punch he'd a won because both verses had holes in their punches. rapverse's 5th and 6th lines were weak as were alot of jae's punches. you both only had 4 good lines to me but jae's 4 were better than rapverse's 4

Nobody is layed back, I'm especially fierce here...
Ya style has lyrica gaping hole like pierced ears/

There that should give you more of a punchline...
I'ma leave u liek six packs, when it's crunchtime/(Hurting)
and

Man this is stupidity. he wants to win?? He-just-can't.
There's more shit in his verse than sewage treatment-plant

I'll beat the man, he's in Dan-ger, I make this gay-hurt
only by spittin pure fire and watching as 'jae-burns'

Like i said had rapverse been able to spit that jae burns joke better he proly would've won but i have to give it to jae burnz

oh yea and here are some of my battles check em out it's your chance criticize me for my lyrics

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169162 me vs. youngsoulja

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171308 me vs. nightmare

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168874 me vs. magical

Lol...





http://s3.-----------------/fernoe/...c=28&st=0&#last

Rhyming crunchtime with punchline...
http://www.google.co.uk/search?hl=e...nchline&spell=1
^523 results.

So much for all the votes on those 2 punches.

Voted For: RapVerse

LOL Damn aii This Is What I feel

I give My vote To Rapverse Bcuz Basically He Came way Much Harder with Punchez and personalz And Jaeburns Lines Were Played And weak (sorry buT the truth is the truth) so thats Just How I Feel and Im Pretty Sure Others Feel the Same Way

Peace

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he got it................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .....to...........................me...........