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Well... We have heard enough from the commune peeps... Lets get some more votes...
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Voted For: Nostradamus
aight this was a tight battle right here........ both of yall came hard... gotta respect that........... breakdown: Anxiety- good shit dawg... good flow and structure was tight... u stayed on topic and used ok immagry... like i said you stayed on topic and told a pretty good story... could have used a little better wordplay but all in all this was a fairly strong verse... not bad homie.. 7/10 Nos- as usual tight ass verse dawg... i liked the flow and structure, it all flowed togeather almost perfectly... stayed on topic and used great immagry.. shit was creative and a good read... was fun to read.. wordplay was good and u used great vocab... great drop dawg.... 8.5/10 overall TIGHT battle... nos takes this one but no hate to anxiety... u came hard as fuck... no hate and good battle to both of yall........... VOTE- NOS........................ |
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This was feedback posted for anxiety
checking polls........ good battle here....... come on CS
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uppin this for Cs and Ai
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Voted For: anxiety
wow, both of y'all had sum nice content....... :) I was feeling anxiety's stand point on "Robbing a House" more than Nos because he stuck to the topic completely through... I thought the demon and angel concept was creative... Nostradamus I was feeling your imagery... As you would expect from the judge, he didn't give a fuck... He said "he can protect his property, after that it's up to luck"... ^^Anxiety u stayed on topic very well, I feel like after this bar.. U went deep into the topic, that's why I feel you won.. although both of you had nice pieces... I feel you had the more effective verse.. good luck to both............ my vote/ anxiety :) |
This was feedback posted for Nostradamus
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Voted For: Nostradamus
WHOAAA this was a nice topical by topical he murdered anxiety in every way, form, shape possible, the imageinary was CRAZY and the vocab and wordplay was off the hook. i liked the structure and creativitiy in the words and with the colors and shit. this was a dope piece from u fam anxiety. ur shit was alright but after readin nos shit u already knew u lost. ur shit was alright bad vocab but the visionary was koo. keep it up fam, i think ur better at topicals then u are battles vote:nos Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for anxiety
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Voted For: anxiety
vote/anxiety.. pros/cons of anxiety Ok...I liked the whole..'job' heist thing... the srtucture was aight..but the multis were great and so was flow..but I was lookin for emotion and relation to the topic and being..and you had it.. very enjoying to read..and no tactics for advangtage.. Nostradamous okay,you had good vocab and structure..but your emotion..and your commitment to stick to the topic wasn't there..it actually was all over the place.. but the oen thing I did like..is how you seperated the two chapters..with great titles..but it didn't win this battle vote/anxiety.. |
Voted For: Nostradamus
this wasnt hard to vote on anxiety: i read yours and i liked how you used a lot of descriptive words cuz it helps put a picture in your head. the only real thing i didnt like about your verse was that you didnt go very deep with the topic of choice. you approached the topic with almost a sense of humor about it, which to me doesent really effect me in any way. it sort of seems like comic relief. the words you used were all used well thoughout your peice and im not saying it was bad, im just saying i wasnt really feeling how you handles the topic. nostradamus: wow............. this was good shit, i couldnt really work out where you were going with this untill almost the last bar of your first verse, but after that it got really interesting. the way you described the emotions people would go through after their house was robbed of a family member was dope.. and it shun light into the problems created by drugs.. overall i think this was a really dope ass battle, props to both.. but i def think nostra has got this on lock.. so: v/nostradamus peace |
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