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Voted For: ambient

i'm one to look on the bright side.. n leave can half full
fact is that ur style is played
.................c'mon, even ur name states u recycle
damn these RB rejects... makin it here?? son u wasted ya wish
chuz u do know that it's a newby thing
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blast ya bones, and .. take-ya-pride, face-it-guy! ..whenever you write is wrong!..
so ima lay you out to dry............, on the same line ya fucking LIFE IS ON!!!
I'm lightning-strong! your not even in health-ill! jus because you FELT SKILLED!!
so im pretty glad you still quote your lines, cuz trust me. NOONE ELSE WILL!!!

It's 4 vs 4 but can wrote like 2 times more so ambient gets the win. amb really syrprised me here with good punches and personals that connected nicely. can used a bunch of whack wordplay bullshit that wont work here, the punches were either weak as fuck or just plain whack through most of his verse but he really picked it up near the end. can you gotta turn away from trying to get good flow and stop cap. your wordplay or w/e.

V-Ambient

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Voted For: Cannabarz

Blaaaah, That Was A Fucking Slaughter...
Canna Tore Him A New One...
Punches: Canna
Flow: Canna
Wordplay: Canna
Fuck Im Not Even Gonna Break It Down...
This Shit Was So One Sided Cuz Amb Underestimated The Fuck Out Of His Oponent...
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just wanna see who won

Voted For: ambient

CannaBarz:
ok you had a good emotion but some iight punches with a decent hit of wordplay in them and a few good metaphores in there but they werent to witty..
try working on your punches n shit...the vocabulary was pretty good and your stucture was good with a pretty decent flow to your verse...but just keep it up...you pretty good


Ambient:
nice stucture to your verse and had some pretty dope punchlinea and mixed with real nice witty metaphores in them...
pretty tight verse overal..i liked your verse the best just had a more of a funnier rb rv thing to it...lol

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Voted For: Cannabarz

cannabarz:

Your drops-suck, so STOP, fuck .. you blessed? your not even POT LUCK..
if u talked to the man upstairs, he'd drop you down the flight of steps u WALKED UP!!..
^^lmao dope opener good flow and multies 9/10
so knock, what?! me fag?, you'll leaved-tagged, your not even honest-guy ..
I mean, you can go downhill skiing on the fuccing slope that I WON THIS BY!!..
^^ehh decent set up dope punch 7/10
exhaust ya tries, your true-gay, sure you'll lose, hey .. it's the rules-play !! ..
they didn't let you into council cause your nice, it's cuz 14's a CUTE AGE!!! ..
^^lmfao wow 10/10
I'm raw-DUDE! .. .............but ambient rides chrit, so should I applaud-too? ..
I mean, if The Council is playing follow the leader, just QUIT! you all-lose! ..
^^dope 8/10
follow laws-rules! ...you might get under, but even the phlight just wonders..
when it comes to round tables, amb gets no say like a LIGHT CONDUCTOR!..
^^decent 6/10
who likes your structure? your garbage! jeez...theirs no hope for your text .. !! ..
you couldn't digest this win/wind, if EMS gave CPR to a hole in your neck !!!...
^^ooooooh dam dopest fucking bar in thie battle 11/10
your known as the best? haha. ..thats ya record, now deduct the last exponents!!..
hes been paying for dickriders, hes more indepth/in debt than his LAST OPPONENT!..
^^good bar 7/10
blast ya bones, and .. take-ya-pride, face-it-guy! ..whenever you write is wrong!..
so ima lay you out to dry............, on the same line ya fucking LIFE IS ON!!! ..
^^dope 8/10
I'm lightning-strong! your not even in health-ill! jus because you FELT SKILLED!!
so im pretty glad you still quote your lines, cuz trust me. NOONE ELSE WILL!!! ..
^^dope closer 10/10

overall : 76/90 (84%)

ambient:

i'm one to look on the bright side.. n leave can half full
fact is that ur style is played
.................c'mon, even ur name states u recycle
^^dope personal hot opener 9/10
mutha' fucka', im trashin' 'n' baggin' u and throwin' u out
guy only set this to unlimited... chuz he couldn't even count
^^ehh decent 6/10
u think that i was stallin' with this battle...... hardly
jus' givin' u some time here
........................ before u lose 'n' leave, just like RB
^^ good personal wack punch 7/10
damn these RB rejects... makin it here?? son u wasted ya wish
chuz u do know that it's a newby thing
............................................to put net records in sigs
^^played concept 5/10

overall : 27/40 (68%)

vote: cannabarz he took this battle hands down

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