dammit strobe sorry please remove that im too drunk now sorry

Voted For: TheWackestMC

A'ight this is one sided...Wackest MC came wit way harder punches and he actually had some multies...Master Mind came a'ight wit some punches and he had personals,,,best line in Master Mind's was his opener. Both had good flow...Don't hate, just elevate. Return the favor, and I'll be ya savior. Haha I'm wack...

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Punchline: logic 4 dubz

Battle: 9th Degree

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This was feedback posted for MaStErMind
 

omg i gotta say mastermind hit harder with punches and was very creative with his lines. if i had more posts, i would of voted for mastermind, but thewackiestMC, keep it up, you know wut cha doin Fame

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dammit strobe sorry please remove that im too drunk now sorry
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haha this guy right heree^^^

Voted For: MaStErMind

hmm weak battle...

TWMC: your verse was a simile to your name wack... you had good wordplay and a couple decent multies but overall it was weak... some OK punches but nothing that really stood out no personals so it was kinda wack

overall : 4.5/10

MM: you had a decent verse... decent wordplay... structure was alittle messed up... even up the lines and dont use the slashes (/////) makes your verse look even wacked and more stretched... better punches than TWMC so it was aiight verse

overall : 6/10

Voted For: TheWackestMC

MaStErMind

*TheWackestMC* cant *Master* this *Mind*/
im bout to beat you like a slave and this master dont lie//
you brought a knife to a gun fight-its gonna be a catastrophe/
punchure ya skin with my lyrical daggers-you cant make a pass at me//
assault you like my name was stephen jackson/
this cat was desperate to battle-still want some action?//
while you at home watchin 8 mile on tv/
ill be on 106 and park kickin it wit AJ and free//
thinkim gonna pass up a battle wi you?-bitch please/
how easy was it to *Bitch-Slap* this MC//
yo you got almost 3 days to post ya verse/
but he probably wont-too busy trin to get his nut to burst//...............your verse was played man...you had decent flow, and the punches were decent...but that kickin it with aj and free line...someone has used that before...i am from MICHIGAN 2 man...so i know it aint your line...but other than that, you just need to be a little bit more creative and more raw...your verse...>>>>>7/10<<<<<<


TheWackestMC

yall dont me to b sparkin the metal, u play ya part in stillettos
i'll lay-up wit ya bitch with the art of Carmello
u say u a mastermind?....i got a faster rhyme
that'll smash ya mind... and leave u last in line
them punches pluck this nigga right back in time
they way u wear ya Mic , that shit is fashion crime
boy i aint playin, im as wack as they come
only time u POP-POP is when u crakin ya thumbs
u aint hot those lines is too cold to bake
n ya bars aint heavy, they fools gold in weight
this bitch prolly stop n cry, when i drop his size
n reveal the fact that he likes dudes wit cock inside
stop ya lies, thats why u get ostricized
and them rhymes u use is so old that they fossilized>>>>>CHO MAN...YOUR VERSE...WAS...UMM...GOOD...LOL...YOU HAD GOOD FLOW...IT WAS IN A WAY FUNNY, AND THE USE OF METAS, VOCAB AND MULTIES WAS GOOD...THAT IS WHAT EDGED YOU, WAS THE VOCAB AND MULTIE HITS...THE ONLY THING YOU NEED TO WORK ON IS ELEVATING TO A NEW LEVEL...IN THIS BATTLE YOU WERE 5 LEVELS UP...GET TO TEN, AND YOU WILL B SET...>>>>>>9/10<<<<<<<<

cmon few more votes peeps.....its a close battle, lets get a winner!

uppin for votes holla aat ya boy in PM and it will b returned

uppin for votes holla aat ya boy in PM and it will b returned
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Voted For: MaStErMind

I have to go with MASTER on this becuase I could understand him better. his flow was ok, rhyming I think he could do better but its iight. hits where I think where a lil harder, personels where harder,imagry was good, opener-closer neither of u have but work on it. SO i HAVE to go with master peace.

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Voted For: TheWackestMC

he got my vote cuz he ripped him in every category but the mastermind did come with some cold shit tho...look at my battles and pick a winner be honest

Voted For: TheWackestMC

mastermind

*TheWackestMC* cant *Master* this *Mind*/
im bout to beat you like a slave and this master dont lie//

nice opener with the wordplay.

you brought a knife to a gun fight-its gonna be a catastrophe/
punchure ya skin with my lyrical daggers-you cant make a pass at me//

no. the flow was off alot and wasnt complex at all.

too basic.

while you at home watchin 8 mile on tv/
ill be on 106 and park kickin it wit AJ and free//

too simple and just weak.

thinkim gonna pass up a battle wi you?-bitch please/
how easy was it to *Bitch-Slap* this MC//

wack. bad attempt at a punch on this one.

yo you got almost 3 days to post ya verse/
but he probably wont-too busy trin to get his nut to burst//

weakk..weak..weak finisher.

wackest mc

yall dont me to b sparkin the metal, u play ya part in stillettos
i'll lay-up wit ya bitch with the art of Carmello

it was a little basic but i liked the carmello line for some reason. somewhat decent opener.

u say u a mastermind?....i got a faster rhyme
that'll smash ya mind... and leave u last in line

no complexity or punch but at least the flow was good. nice amount of multis in this bar.

them punches pluck this nigga right back in time
they way u wear ya Mic , that shit is fashion crime

a little weak. however, it was better than what mastermind had in most of his verse. still a bad overall attempt at a punch/metaphore.

boy i aint playin, im as wack as they come
only time u POP-POP is when u crakin ya thumbs

lol kinda funny with the first line. the second was an average punch. lol but probably the best line of the battle.

u aint hot those lines is too cold to bake
n ya bars aint heavy, they fools gold in weight

first line was filler and garbage. the second was halfway decent because you attempted a punch.

this bitch prolly stop n cry, when i drop his size
n reveal the fact that he likes dudes wit cock inside


nope. just weak.

stop ya lies, thats why u get ostricized
and them rhymes u use is so old that they fossilized

average..a little basic though. it flowed good at least.

both of you need to work on personals and punches more. but the wackest emcee takes this because he came a slight more complex than mastermind did in his verse. elevate to both of you and stay up