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lil C.A.L.I 12-10-04 06:40 PM

dat was tight u and tito! :thumbup:

Young Drama 12-10-04 06:49 PM

yall didnt really diss em but it was below average, i heard all dis shit about Tito and this nigga is mad overrated, Empire, meh, u both need to flow to the beat

5/10

Young Drama 12-10-04 06:50 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by lil C.A.L.I
dat was tight u and tito! :thumbup:


biggest D/R ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lethal GK 12-10-04 08:38 PM

man aight hold up ill give them some honest feed back not to hate but shit wasnt all that great imma tell you how to make it better though Tito you got a voice that sounds kind of raw if you put some emotion in that shit and spit harder shit would come out great and caliph you need speak up on the mic and spit harder too but I see you into that poetry type stuff so thats why you come off like that really to me it dont really seem like tito was off beat that much he was at times but if he comes harder with it then that wouldnt happen, but to me it seems like thats his style
and ohh yeah you gotta come with something harder then that to even get my attention for a battle

K.ontroverz.Y 12-10-04 10:45 PM

tito you Just might be nice if you dont rap so close to the mic. like move the mic like a ruler stick back and rap. trust it'll work..

L.E 12-11-04 12:26 AM

A'ight this was a decen track...CALI you need to work on your voice quality...and you do need to sound more confident, like more emotion and shit. Decent track...elevation is good for anybody.

Hit this up. Thanks.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165317

Mark Greyson 12-11-04 12:05 PM

LMAO... how the fuck you plan on beatin me..? post up the battle kid... Avalon doesn't duck.

Speats 12-11-04 12:49 PM

the beat is 100% dope...what is it?...and tito...your voice is dope...but flow like they said...good drop

~Lady Fiya~ 12-11-04 01:14 PM

This is not hate feedback just truth...

Titobronsky--- ur lyrics were ok, but it seemed like u were talkin', not rapping at all... the beat was nice, but it's like u avoided it completely.. it was off, but u can alwayz work on that.. just sounded like u were speakin to four clipz not dissin, then ur too close to the mic..

Empire--------this time u were kinda far from the mic or your vocals weren't eq-ed, ur lyrics weren't bad either, u fell off in a couple of places.. i seen sum emotion in this but u weren't as hype as i thought u were gonna be, cuz we know u already confident-u just need to express that on the mic..
No hate, just work on them things and y'all str8....

I didn't read the other feedback, i just listened to the track and that's my input.. hopefully y'all can look at it in a positive way to help elevate for future drops..

Ca'lam 12-11-04 01:20 PM

aight.. iaint gon lie.. in this track tito ya flowwas off.. but i like his other tracks.. i like his flow normally.. but this one wasnt crack na mean ? most ya other tracks is crack.. cook it up na mean ? but you strait dun.. it wasent bad.. iight..

empire... it was aight.. yea you werent sure of ya self.. you need to you know.. grab the mic and make it bleed.. you not spittin gully enough.. lyrics were strait.. but put somemore oomph in that shit.. word.. holla atcha boi -1

TitoBronsky 12-13-04 03:18 AM

appreciate the feed....... to the top wit diss.....


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