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L.E 12-12-04 02:48 PM

Voted For: MetaSkriptz

Whoa...both came good in this one.

CeEd...I liked the point of view that you wrote your topical. It was unique...your flow was good, structure needs work. Vocab was decent...imagery I wasn't feelin'. Overall, nice but work on your imagery.

Meta...the kind of shit I expected from you. Very good flow and vocab...imagery was there...the perspective you wrote it in was completely believable. You get this one for an overall stronger verse.

Return the favor please...

Topical: hipnoticz

Battle: 9th Degree

Topical: Metaskriptz

~Lady Fiya~ 12-14-04 01:10 PM

This was feedback posted for MetaSkriptz
 
nice, very nice........................................... reppin' M.A.B stay up, boi.. :thumbup:

atti? 12-14-04 06:05 PM

Voted For: MetaSkriptz

???What The Fuck, No Contest...
I Was Looking For Something More Creative...
But Niether Emccee Really Gave Me That...
But Meta Had Better Flow/Concept/Storyline/Imagry...
I Liked How I Felt Like I Was 5 Again Waking Up For Christmas...
He Put Me Into The Scenario Perfectly...
This Was A Pretty One Sided Battle Overall Though...
.One.

(X)eed 12-15-04 03:10 AM

yo yo yo keep honest votes cummin thnx......yo

GangsStarShit 12-15-04 07:21 AM

Voted For: MetaSkriptz

I think that MetaSkriptz got this battle because i feel that MetaSkriptz came stronger in the following categories...Topic i felt MetaSkriptz got it was effective and was on point (x) CeEd u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion rhyming i felt went to MetaSkriptz good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to MetaSkriptz and flow and structure i'll give to MetaSkriptz.

V/MetaSkriptz


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