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M-Eazy 12-17-04 11:53 PM

i usually return all votes...but that wasnt explained jackass...try again...*NEXT*

M-Eazy 12-20-04 11:29 AM

uppn............this........battle..........people .......

Sik Wit It 12-20-04 12:07 PM

Voted For: RED BEAM

First of all... Artik, what kinda drop was that?
i mean..ur structure was flyin all over the damn
place..ur punches were pretty decent, vocab was
aight from you..but overall u had a weak drop..work
on your punches here...Obviously Pyro took this one.
had nice multi's..and punches...decent structure..and
had a nice flow to it...[/size]

M-Eazy 12-21-04 06:50 PM

aiyo...we need some more votes on this shit...for real, uppin this

intensify effect 12-22-04 04:39 PM

Voted For: Artik Phrost

artik phrost got this hands down...

way harder punches that was more original
Feel strife!..Bullets 'engage with ya bio'!..Leave you wit a 'hitched life'!!..
His tight?!..Fuck that!..'Rapverse doesn't feel RB', why you think they switched sites?!!!../5 (T.fucken.KO!!)
^^are you Red Beam or Pyro?...or do we have a case of Aliases?^^
that was a nice hit plus personal......

FLOW ARTIK PHROST GOT IT HANDS DOWN...

ALL AROUND a.p JUST CAME WAY HARDER THATS ALL GOOD BATTLE

hang-man 12-24-04 03:34 AM

Voted For: Artik Phrost

there wasnt no real battle here just hard creative punches and wordplaya nd just more wittyer verse danm much props that verse is sick and a nice drop from pyro but man i thought punches wasnt really that close good battle

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Scareface 12-24-04 03:45 PM

Voted For: RED BEAM

Aii This Is How It Is

My explanation
Punchez.....Pyro
Personal.....Artik
Multi's.......Pyro
Metas'.........Pyro
Vocab........artik
Structure......Pyro

So there You Have It
Please Take The Time To RTF In My battle ..I Only have One Battle And I Think It Wouldnt Hurt You To RTF Thanx

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M-Eazy 12-24-04 10:27 PM

aight^imma hit up one of ur battles when/if u get another one open...thanx for tha honest vote hang-man...imma hit up one of urs too, i said i return all honest votes...so i got u...


uppn this...2-2

M-Eazy 12-26-04 04:26 PM

uppin again................

*fifty characters*...

Speats 12-26-04 06:51 PM

Voted For: RED BEAM

i need to go with pyro...
i dont give a fuck if u a girl...i aint takin this soft
they call me PYRO bitch...cause i melt tha phrost
this was like wack but you have dope vocab...ya structure is almost perfect,,,execpted for the last verse...

Artik Phrost :
your verse was almost annoying tyo read...structure sucks...good vocab
We don't hear a thing you say!..
Ya whole fucken team is gay!!..
And ya 'career is onli piss', Because 'everybody goes for a Pee on PSAs'= bad

M-Eazy 12-26-04 08:55 PM

good lookkn on tha vote....lets get some more in here....

50hater_killer 12-28-04 03:14 PM

Voted For: Artik Phrost

flow art
rhyming tie
strucutre art
opener-closer art
personals art
hits art
vocab art
imagry art
over all art and hey hit up on my link peace.

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M-Eazy 12-28-04 05:55 PM

learn how to explain stuff...im not returnin that..
*15 characters*

The Militant 12-29-04 10:40 AM

Voted For: RED BEAM

I THINK THAT PYRO HAD THE BETTER VERSE THEN ARTIK PHROST
PYRO---I THINK U HAD A BETTER ALL AROUND VERSE...PUNCHES HIT REALLY HARD...METAS WERE BEIN USED CORRECTLY...FLOW WAS PREETY GOOD...STRUCTRE WAS TIGHT A VERY GOOD FLOW AND STRUCTRE...WORDPLAY WAS USED VERY WELL...RHYMES WERE VERY GOOD...GOOD JOB 7.5/10
BEST LINES----i dont give a fuck if u a girl...i aint takin this soft
they call me PYRO bitch...cause i melt tha phrost
PSA runnin this shit…just stay on tha curb
Cross yo boundaries is deadly, and im speakin of more than just words
ARTIK----URE FLOW WAS PREETY GOOD...STRUCTRE WAS KINDA OFF...PUNCHES DIDNT HIT AS HARD AS PYROS...METAS WERENT USED VERY WELL BUT STILL IGHT...
WORDPLAY COULD HAVE BEEN USED BETTER BUT IT WAS OKAY... 6/10
BEST LINE----We don't hear a thing you say!..Ya whole fucken team is gay!!..
And ya 'career is onli piss', Because 'everybody goes for a Pee on PSAs'!!..//4 (ut oh..commercial..POTTY BREAK!)
(WHAT WAS WITH THE LTTLE BATHROOM BREAK COMMENT RANDOM BUT FUNNY...
PEACE...

M-Eazy 12-30-04 10:55 AM

good lookn out on tha votes...they will be return HONESTLY...dont trip...thanx x-cell...uppin this


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