ok first of all this was tight it had a dope stucture and flow chain to it...and then the worpdlay and emotional desires were dope....this peice was very done well....one of the best ive seen from both of you....weerd...just try workin on vocabulary a little more then that would up alot of your shit....9.4/10

up up up up up up up up up up up

uppin for some feedback before 3 gats destory ya skicap

I agree...really expected this to be some newb type shit...lol...no hate...But damn, yall both proved me wrong...shit was nice...couldv'e been better, but it stayed solid...8/10...1

thanks fam....up up up lets see more feed leave links and we'll return tha fava.....
peace~1

uppin for them... old school shit right here.........

uppin for old tiime sake :thumbup:

u-p-p-i-n......