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~Luciano~ 12-17-04 03:35 AM

Uppin this shit for explained REAL votes

4fil 12-17-04 03:41 AM

Voted For: *Troop*

lol i got to give this battle to troop.... brilliant structure and flow here.... but i think you take it with your humur
"M"en "A"bove "B"itches sent Henchmen with 2 Thongs 2 Stripz
Your an Emcee with Lisp tryed Scriptures only Delivered Skriptz
This ya Toughest Fight Since Transvestites @ Virgina-Beach
^^^lol!!
so some good and funny lines there by troop

scrips... wasnt a bad verse.... i think you need to work on your flow and structure.... more personals i think and your punches just dont come hard enough
So Stop A Blind Spit Right Quick, Cuz This Kid Is Only Effective With Prewritten Mixtures
...... lol...... but your lines are a bit stretched so that sort of kills the flow...

Vote Troop

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GangsStarShit 12-17-04 06:36 AM

Voted For: *Troop*

This was quite a good battle ain't seen one in a while but i do think i know who got this...

Skriptz your verse was hella stretched but it flowed well enough...but work on that...punches were good the ice up the hill woulda been better flipped but it was aight some good personals but didn't feel this as a punch though

From ‘Murder Capital’, But The Only Thing He’s Seen On This Is Pure Rejection
Get Brutally Dissected Faster Than A Horny Guy Getting An Errection

Wasn't hard (no pun) to me but the rest was aight but things you should work on definitely is the structure that was jus crazy...

*Troop* a decent verse too punches were harder hittin and personals were good...i thought the MAB bit to begin wit was dope and the closer too was also effective flow and structure was perfect was real intact some wordplay and multies thrown in to so all round i think you got this...

V/*Troop*...RTF on my sig plz

Ambient 12-17-04 01:00 PM

This was feedback posted for Skriptz
 
checkin' the polls......................................

¤ÐÅž¤ 12-17-04 01:27 PM

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 
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Sik Wit It 12-17-04 02:57 PM

stop removin votes...
EastCoats shit was explained

~Luciano~ 12-17-04 03:30 PM

u removed one of my explained votes

and strobe wants VOTES that explain WHY they voted
not bashing the person who lost....theres a diff
jus cuz its a long vote dont mean its sayin shit

Sik Wit It 12-17-04 05:15 PM

^no kid..
abstrakt's vote was hardly xplaind..
mine was...

EastCoast 12-17-04 05:31 PM

^ mine wuz explained..............i wuz just saying hat troop cooda won diss shit but didnt, i wasnt bashing you...i was sain wut the winner did good and wut the loser did bad......read tha rulez, thats how u explain a vote....butu since it's already dq'd fuck it.

~Luciano~ 12-18-04 12:44 AM

Ne way uppin 2 get this shit ova wit

Mad Dog 12-18-04 05:00 AM

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 
...*Troop* my rtf?...(GSS battle?)................

~Luciano~ 12-18-04 02:28 PM

bumpin this shit for the grand finale

Nynth Degree 12-18-04 07:57 PM

Voted For: *Troop*

Skriptz:
Ya Rhymes Are Tight? Nah Your Wack To A New Degree…Let’s Sharpen Up Ya Finger Joint
But Even If Ya Still Tried To Key A Dope Verse…Ya Flow Would Never Be On Point
Opener was weak, understood it but punch didn't really hit
Troop Battling Skriptz? It’s a Cold Way Down…Just Like Ice-Skating Up Hill
Chill, I Think You Okay…But You Could Elevate, Wait You Don’t Have Enough Skill
Weak...
Practically RV’s Your Life Man…Hope Everyone’s Watching This
And I’d Love To Talk About Your Skill…But I Don’t Talk Alot Shit*
sub-par attempt at a personal, not hard at all
From ‘Murder Capital’, But The Only Thing He’s Seen On This Is Pure Rejection
Get Brutally Dissected Faster Than A Horny Guy Getting An Errection
Weak. Why would horny guys get dissected?
You Have No Sense Of A Keyed Verse, That Comes Straight From The Random Scriptures
So Stop A Blind Spit Right Quick, Cuz This Kid Is Only Effective With Prewritten Mixtures
Decent vocab usage in closer, but wasn't very hard

Troop:
"M"en "A"bove "B"itches sent Henchmen with 2 Thongs 2 Stripz
Your an Emcee with Lisp tryed Scriptures only Delivered Skriptz
Decent opener, good play off his name, saw a few multis here too
Should of Copyrighted Wayne Sig rights cuz Posa's come Fully
Skriptz Equipped with Joint & Slingshot & thinks he's "Soulja42o"
Weak personal
You have the Ability of 1 Legged Dwarf thats tryna Ducka Shelf
If you defeat Tc then u Out of a crew..Stop tryna Fuckya Self
2nd line had an aight personal, setup was played, yet funny imagery
Jocked my style.Next is Dyein ya Hair wit"Sperm-in-ya-Bleach"
This ya Toughest Fight Since Transvestites @ Virgina-Beach
Decent...
Juggling FlowIntelligents Jock Strap 2 get in M.a.b Sic "Lic"Ture
Leave u Bruised No Ability 2 Show ya Face like ya Sig "Pic"Ture
Weak closer

Winner: Troop, for harder punches, and an overall better verse. This really wasn't that good of a battle though, neither of you came really hard, but no hate.
Return the vote to a link in my sig, do it honestly:thumbup:

Replay 01-01-05 04:01 PM

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 
just checking polls cause both of ya'll is like fam

K.ontroverz.Y 01-01-05 04:49 PM

Voted For: *Troop*

damn i had to voe on this one

troop; the wordplay was fuckin craz. this shit was off the hook. got me like...dayum..the punches were decent.probably 7.5/10 some hit some had potential to hit but didint..ur vocab was nice.from now on uze this structure im tellin u itz fiya....mayn overall nice drop 8.4/10

skriptz; structure was good. but ur styll not that good yet. u;ll get bette eventually. ur flow was choppy. punches didnt hbit.. good vocab. umm no real personals. this was decent but nothing compared to his

overall;6.3/10

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